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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 4# I'm good at using the analyst tool, MATLAB. Since I major in International Business, there're numerous eccentric phenomena to be unravelled. Here is the MATLAB 's vital importance. It's easy to get into strides and of great utility. Input data or diagrams with simple additional steps, you'll get the some new diagrams or curves which are really helpful, especially when too much variants affect the results. What's more, getting the skill makes me glitter in the course of internship. It's means that I own the advantage over others who cannot provide compelling subjective evidence.
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2017-11-02 10:40:32 来自 口语喵
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Day-2 Nellayang
语音方面:
时间超时了,要加快语速。主要问题是对素材的不熟悉,说的有很多内容和文本不一样,句子啰嗦。停顿处偏多。平时要多练习语音知识,单词不同词性是不同的意思,不能乱用。需要学习语音课的内容。
I'm good at using the analyst tool. 单词用错,应该是Analysis tool

逻辑素材:
素材可以。但素材里的分句之前缺少必要的逻辑连词,更不要乱用逻辑连词。
Since I major in International Business, there're numerous eccentric phenomena to be unravelled. Here is the MATLAB 's vital importance. 逻辑不顺。
Majoring in International Business, I need to learn how to ravel numerous eccentric phenomena with MATLAB. The tool is efficient and really helps me to get into my strides.

语言方面:
1. 短语结构使用不当,并列短语逻辑不合理
It's easy to get into strides and of great utility. 一般是get into one’s stride,
It's easy to get into my strides
And 连接的两个短语词性不合理;
It is of great utility
2. 啰嗦; 从句省略的逻辑主语有问题,有歧义; 修饰语不对。
Input data or diagrams with simple additional steps, you'll get the some new diagrams or curves which are really helpful, especially when too much variants affect the results.
如果是想表达祈使句,应该用:
Input data or diagrams with simple additional steps and you’ll get the(删掉)some helpful diagrams or curves to solve problems, especially when there are too many variants affect the results.
In course of internship 直接改成 Internship
2017-11-02 18:08
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评论 1 楼: 谢谢老师指导~会继续改进哒~
2017-11-02 19:37
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 I'm good at using the analysis tool, MATLAB. Majoring in International Business, I need to learn how to ravel numerous eccentric phenomena with MATLAB. The tool is efficient and really helps me to get into my strides.Here is the MATLAB 's vital importance. Input data or diagrams with simple additional steps and you’ll get some helpful diagrams or curves to solve problems, especially when there are too many variants affect the results.What's more, getting the skill makes me glitter internship. It's means that I own the advantage over others who cannot provide compelling ojective evidence.
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2017-11-05 13:01
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