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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# I’m the gender who only studied in traditional classroom, but I believe future students will have class on the internet.
Since there’re so many advantages of studying online, such as we can learn anywhere or anytime. In addition, it makes dreams come true to take classes from famous teachers all over the world.
For example, I’m a Chinese working in Japan, learning English on an online class. What a fantastic idea to use off time to learn English from famed Chinese teachers.
Although it requires more self discipline, there’s no problem for people who are really eager to learn.
That explain why I think so.
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2017-11-01 22:15:45 来自 口语喵
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逻辑上 观点合理,论证充分,不错
语法上 learn 是个及物动词 最好后面加上宾语 gender在这里 个人不是很明白是什么意思 所以就换了一种说法 use off time 不经常见到 所以我换了一种说法 
语音上 self-discipline 发音有点问题 最好再多一点感情, 多练习几遍 把流畅度提上来
小伙伴加油吧 
2017-11-01 22:48
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评论 1楼 谢谢!哎呀我想说generation的orzzz弄错了哈哈丢人。。。learn是可以做自动词的~self discipline不经常说还需要多练习一下

2017-11-01 23:03
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