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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# As far as I am conserned, the future student will have classes on the internet instead of in tradition classroom buildings. Firstly, technology is increasingly updated so online class can achieve the same effect as traditional education or even better. For example , the Lanlib through the combination of online course and practice to achieve the purpose of teaching English and the effect is remarkable.Secondly, online class can save a lot of time so that we don't need to wast time on way to school which was far away from home.Although the traditional education is also very good ,but online one is the trend.
2017-11-01 21:56:59 来自 口语喵
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2017-11-02 10:26
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1.逻辑
观点(网上教学)+理由(1.随着科技的进步,网上教育的效果与传统教学模式的不相上下甚至更好 ;2.网上教育使我们节省了大量时间,尤其是花在上学路上的时间)+例子(朗播)+小让步
逻辑挺不错,例子帮朗播打call,哈哈!
2.语言
tradition classroom buildings->traditional classroom buildings,
lanlib->langlib 
on way to school->on the way to school 后者为固定搭配,前者有“对于...的方式”的意思,用在这里不适合。
3.语音
声音有点小,注意有些词可能读成升调比较好,例如:Although ,这样语气上可能更符合让步的感觉。
2017-11-02 14:18
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2017-11-02 17:18
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