口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# from my own perspective, I believe that in the future students will have classes on the internet. That's because having online classes for students is very convenient and inexpensive, compared with still in traditional classroom. for example, last summer vacation I took English courses on the Internet. I didn't have to get up at 6 am to take the subway to school every morning. Instead, I just needed to turn on the computer at 8 o 'clock, and then I could see my teacher. How convenient it is! What's more, it totally cost me 1000 yuan to attend online courses, which was much cheaper than in school. Thus I think students will have classes on the Internet in the future.
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2017-11-01 17:28:17 来自 口语喵
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没找到语法问题
就是第二句的表达我习惯说It's very cnvnt and inexpsv for students to take online courses.
结构清晰
详略方面,首句可以再简洁一点,直接说支持这个观点。(下面说以我自己为例?)
我自己觉得总体都挺好的😍
2017-11-02 09:42
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