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口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# From my point of view, I believe that students will still have class in traditional classroom buildings. Because firstly, having class in traditional classroom buildings means they have a face-to-face communication, which strengthens the ties among students but also between students and teachers. After all, it is necessary to have interpersonal relationship for human beings, and having class together in a real space is a good way to build up that relationship. Secondly, having class on the Internet for a long period of time is harmful to children’s eyesight, especially when increasing the study pressure. Although Internet is useful, it is not suitable for everything. In a word, I support that students should still have their class in traditional classroom buildings.
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2017-11-01 17:06:08 来自 口语喵
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我来啦!!
声音好好听诶,羡慕ing
1.第二句的从句只有but also是不是前面少了个not only
2.human beings感觉范围有点大了,就是上升到一种科学研究报告的感觉了
3.real space感觉怪怪的,不过能大概明白想表达的是啥意思,不过建议最好一换(虽然我也不知道怎么具体表达
其他貌似没有啥大问题,第二个原因我没想到呢,让步的逻辑也好喜欢。诺,花花给你��
2017-11-01 20:28
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