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11-01
口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# If I had to choose between these two forms of class, I would definitely prefer to the online class. The first reason is that having classes on the internet has no limitation of the location of both of the students and teacher. For example, if I’m in Shanghai and I want to take some psychology seminar in Stanford. While, I could take this class without the trouble and expense if this seminar is given online. The second reason is that the internet based class could give the teacher more immediate response from the students. Take the popular online school YY talk for example, hundreds even thousands of students could comment on the teacher’s pedagogy at the same time. No off line class could achieve this. So my main point is that in the future the traditional classroom teaching will be replaced by the internet teaching.
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2017-11-01 16:53:26 来自 口语喵
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小姐姐声音很好听哦,耳朵已怀孕。
1. 逻辑 逻辑线比较清晰,框架很明显。
2.语言:‘The first reason is that having classes on the internet has no limitation of the location of both of the students and teacher.’该句可以尝试用‘there is no limit to location of students and teachers’.
             ‘hundreds even thousands of ’疑似中文表达。
              句式应避免单一化。
3.语音:节奏重读俱佳。
4.建议:句式在丰富些会更好。
    
2017-11-01 19:04
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评论 1 楼: 多谢~努力多多学句式
2017-11-01 20:35
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