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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 3# 【作业一】
有些人觉得岁数大了再出国旅游比较好,那时候有了一定的经济积累。而我还是更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅行,毕竟年轻的时候更需要走出国门看一看,让自己的人生有更多种可能,而不需要吃好的住好的才行。所以,一定要趁着年轻就去出国旅游!
【作业二】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
1.I prefer to travel abroad when I were young.
2.Travelling abroad at a young age is my preference.
3.Travelling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.
【作业三】
Some people may hold the view that it is better to travel abroad for the accumulation of money then. However, travelling abroad at a young age is preferable for me. After all, people need to travel abroad to widen thier horizon and create more possibilities for their life as soon as possible, instead of eating good things and living in ritzy hotels.So, let’s move on, when we are young.
2017-11-01 15:41:08 来自 托福作文咩
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我来啦!!
第一句:用for搭配的有点怪怪的,还是建议用个从句连接原因
第三句:eating good things and living in ritzy hotels的tone和前面的widen their horizon and create more possibilities差的有点远,建议换一换用词
最后一句:乍一看有点突兀,如果是呼吁的话最后最好用叹号哈,然后move on是有点“继续前进”的意思,感觉用在这儿不太合适呢
2017-11-01 20:17
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【作业一】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的让步段。[br]第一步:给出反方的观点和理由。[br]第二步:给出坚持自己看法的理由。[br]第三步:重申自己的观点。[br]有些人认为我们年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候空闲时间多,支付旅游的花费也比年轻人容易,而年轻人出国旅游通常是花父母的钱。但是,年轻人正处于人生的关键阶段。如果他们能得到良好的条件和环境, 他们可以增加意想不到的知识和经验,获得更多的成长。因此,只要我们的家庭能够负担得起,我认为我们都应该在年轻时选择出国旅行。[br]【作业二】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]1.A prefer to do B when A be young.[br]2.Doing B at a young age be A’s preference.[br]3.Doing B at a young age be preferable for A.[br]1. I prefer to travel aboard when I am young.[br]2. Traveling aboard at a young age is my preference.[br]3. Traveling aboard at a young age is preferable for me.[br]【作业三】[br]请将你在作业二中写的让步段翻译成英文。[br]Some people think that it is better for us to travel abroad when we are older, because we have more free time then, and can afford the cost easier than the youngster,for they had to spend their parents' money usually. But the youngster are at their key stages of life. If they could be given good conditions and environment at this time,they could increase their knowledge and experiences unexpectly, and gain more growth. So as long as our family can afford it, I think we should all choose to travel abroad when we are young.[br]

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