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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 3# 【作业一】
有些人觉得岁数大了再出国旅游比较好,那时候有了一定的经济积累。而我还是更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅行,毕竟年轻的时候更需要走出国门看一看,让自己的人生有更多种可能,而不需要吃好的住好的才行。所以,一定要趁着年轻就去出国旅游!
【作业二】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
1.I prefer to travel abroad when I were young.
2.Travelling abroad at a young age is my preference.
3.Travelling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.
【作业三】
Some people may hold the view that it is better to travel abroad for the accumulation of money then. However, travelling abroad at a young age is preferable for me. After all, people need to travel abroad to widen thier horizon and create more possibilities for their life as soon as possible, instead of eating good things and living in ritzy hotels.So, let’s move on, when we are young.
2017-11-01 15:41:08 来自 托福作文咩
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我来啦!!
第一句:用for搭配的有点怪怪的,还是建议用个从句连接原因
第三句:eating good things and living in ritzy hotels的tone和前面的widen their horizon and create more possibilities差的有点远,建议换一换用词
最后一句:乍一看有点突兀,如果是呼吁的话最后最好用叹号哈,然后move on是有点“继续前进”的意思,感觉用在这儿不太合适呢
2017-11-01 20:17
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【作业一】[br]请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的让步段。[br]第一步:给出反方的观点和理由。[br]第二步:给出坚持自己看法的理由。[br]第三步:重申自己的观点。[br]诚然,我并没有否认如果老年出国旅游没有任何的一点好处。例如,如果老年出去玩的话,他们可以对旅游地点有更深入的了解,可以比年轻人更能体会当地文化背景和习俗。但是,这个观点跟上述观点比起来太过薄弱了。我还是觉得年轻人出去玩会更好,因为他们会更有精力和体力,来维持他们的旅游。[br]【作业二】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]1.A prefer to do B when A be young.[br]2.Doing B at a young age be A’s preference.[br]3.Doing B at a young age be preferable for A.[br]I prefer to travel abroad when I am young.[br]Traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.[br]Traveling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.[br]【作业三】[br]请将你在作业二中写的让步段翻译成英文。[br]Admittedly, I am not saying that it is no any advantages to travel abroad when you are old. For instance, if you travel abroad at an old age, you will have a deep understanding in the sites you visited since you have more experience than the young do. However, on balance, the issue above pales in comparison with the issue that people should travel when they are young, which can have enough energy and stamina to sustain your busy schedule.

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