口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# In my opinion, I believe that students will take lessons on the internet in the future. Well, there are several reasons, the first one is that online courses can save more time. Just think of we don’t need to go down stairs and wait for a bus and spend a lot of time on the way to school. We can use the time to relex or study, which is a more efficient way of time utilization. What’s more, online courses is more convinient than offline courses. I just need to open my computer and choose an appropriate time according to myself to take the lessons. So I can arrange my own affairs more freely. Look, I can have my class either on morning or evening and don't have to think about the time of my teachers and other students.
2017-11-01 12:54:40 来自 口语喵
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这个在图书馆发的传不了音频,ooo%>_<%
2017-11-01 12:56
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1.逻辑
两部分理由明确,解释清晰。
online courses is more convinient than offline courses  这句的逻辑,方便修饰课程,感觉有点奇怪,如果换成上线上课程比上线下课程方便会更好吧。
2.语言
just think 后面加句子应该不用of 而是 that吧
online courses is?  复数要用are吧
3.语音
呃。。。。脑补有困难
4.建议
看到了很多。can 和need。要不要少一点?还有注意下小错误哈。
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2017-11-01 15:27
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