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口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# In my opinion, students must have classes on the internet in the future. First, we face a serious problem that students in different areas can not gain the equally quality education because excellent teachers always gather in the developed cities. While with classes on the internet, the problem will be solved. Students in poor and remote village can accept high quality education and learn more efficiently. It is significant not only for students but also for society. In addition, having classes on the internet saves quite a few time for students. They need not to spend to much time on the way to school. They have more spare time to do other things, such as doing exercise and helping parents do housework.
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2017-11-01 12:41:22 来自 口语喵
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1.逻辑:题目好像不是说must,而是will。
2.语言:can not gain the equally quality education 中,不需要冠词the;equally改为equal,或  把equally放到gain前面,然后后面变成high-quality edu.
While with classes on the internet, the problem will be solved 这里的will be solved , 个人感觉是倾向于用would be solved,可以再咨询一下别的小伙伴。
They need not to spend to much time on the way to school 。。too much time(c粗心哈)
3.语音:注意意群之间的停顿 和某些词汇发音的清晰。
4.建议:写完检查语法和语言。语音可以多录几遍。
2017-11-01 13:24
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