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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# I believe that in the future the online education will make more sense. First it’s more convenient for students to have classes on the internet, because students do not have to squeeze in crowded buses or trains to get to school, and what they need to do is just turn on the computers, move their mice, and type on the keyboard, saving time and efforts. Second, classes online is more flexible, and provides more opportunities, as students can take classes which they prefer in anytime, and they can even listen to lectures from Harvard University. Therefore, I think in the future students will have classes on online.
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2017-11-01 12:33:37 来自 口语喵
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两个理由,一个是方便,省时省力少花钱;另外就是资源共享,不过这个点上我没点到,只是摆出他们Top schools 的一些领先应用来强调这个趋势....
我的盲点,向你学习~

如果罗列的例子把其浓缩精简化就更好了。

语音: 还是向你学习~






2017-11-01 17:16
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逻辑上 观点切题,论证充分
内容上 ,省时省力少花钱;学习资源优质 有对比,没有转折和让步, 但说理很具体,有总结,行文很流畅
语音确实不错 我没有挑出毛病 你是练习了多少?都是怎么练习的?这个你说的时候练习了几遍,是否脱稿了?
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2017-11-01 23:12
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