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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 3# 【作业一】
有些人认为我们年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候没有压力,旅游的时候也一身轻松,但是我觉得,年轻的时候有学业、事业的压力,年纪大了未尝没有养儿育女的压力呢。而且在那个时候可能我们对国外已经没有什么向往了,会更恋家。所以我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。
【作业二】
1.I prefer to travel abroad when I was young.
2.Traveling abroad at a young age is my preference.
3.Traveling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.
【作业三】
While traveling abroad at a young age is my preference, some people also insists that it is better to do it when we become older, since at that time, we will live without stress and will definitely enjoy a great time when traveling. From my perspective, we are indeed under the pressure from school or work at a young age, but what about the responsibilities of raising children or feeding home when we get older? Additionally, at that moment, we might have already lost the longing of traveling abroad and prefer to enjoy the family. Therefore, traveling abroad at a young age is preferable for me.
2017-11-01 11:59:40 来自 托福作文咩
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1.“年纪大了再出国旅游更好,因为那时候没有压力”不太理解没有什么压力
2.第一句话since那里应该可以另起一句了吧,不然这句话时间状语很多,尤其是when...
3.“some people also insists”多了点东西哦
4.渴望longing for sth
5.”enjoy the family“改成family time会不会更好?不然总感觉要吃人
2017-11-01 15:56
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评论 1楼 哈哈,感觉要吃人,哈哈哈哈哈哈嗝
2017-11-01 16:09
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