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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# I think in the future students will have classes on the internet.
Look around you, we already are. Many of my classmates choose network teaching, which enable them from the restrictions of time and space. And it will help you to save your time and money, since you don’t need to go to a real classroom, and you don’t need to pay for your transportation. Some people are likely to worry about students’ participation in class. But, in fact, students who would never raise their hand in a classroom often take active parts in [class activities at ]online lessons.
For those reasons, I think it will replace the old way.
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2017-11-01 11:21:55 来自 口语喵
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1.Look around you, we already are.这句话不该省略。让人摸不着头脑。
2.which enable them from the restrictions of time and space.这句话不对。你自己翻译一下..这使他们能够从时间空间的限制???which enable them to get over the restrictions of time and space.感觉这样可以。
3. And it will help you to save your time and money新句开头时不要总用And 你会发现你文章里And很多。改成What's more Additionally都行。
4. raise their hand前面是students后面应该也是复数。
5.建议一下条理问题。先是给出你的选择。然后说原因。你的原因有两点。1.没有时间空间限制。2。省钱和时间。你两点都没有展开说也没有举例子。就显得很乱也很没有说服性。我建议就算说一点也要说详细(也就是有例子有细节)。
6.别用you当主语。说you怎样怎样。这里的you就是考官了。但你的题目是students。是网课对students产生什么好的影响。students通过网可能怎样。而不是you。
2017-11-01 16:43
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评论 1 楼:嗯嗯,你说完我才发现这个问题,谢谢啦!~我有修改了一下
I think in the future students will have classes on the internet. Many of my classmates choose network teaching, as it helps us to save our time and money, since we don’t need to go to a real classroom, and we don’t need to pay for our transportation. What’s more, as the teaching side does not need to provide a fixed venue, the costs of our courses will also come down. Say, as I know, traditional classes are usually two to three times more expensive than online classes. So I think it will replace the old way.
2017-11-01 17:31
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