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口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3#
I absolutely favor that students will have classes on the internet.
Even though I hate to admit, studying online indeed has more benefits for students than studying in traditional classroom has. I mean, firstly, studying online saves a lot of time to commute to school. Because they can study in their home, it is convenient for them to eat something slowly while having courses online. Also studying online can make up the flaw that our educational resource is not evenly. You know, many famous on-line educational platform, like khan academic and coursera, provide many priceless courses freely and openly. And these courses are offered by the top-notch university.
So, I think in future students have classes on-line might be a good choose.
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2017-11-01 10:07:36 来自 口语喵
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hey yo yo~what's up. bro..美式,美式,比美式咖啡还美式
很流利很快和很好,
提点不成熟的小意见:

1. 但听着有点急,适当添加一些断句听起来应该更舒服。

 2. 我听着有的单词a读成i 了???

hate to admit 之类的非实质内容可以挑着省掉,虽然很casual,但总的来说全文太长鸟。
可以试试考虑用尽量少的句子说尽量多的内容。

eat something slowly 有点怪可以换成具体的?

I think in future students have classes on-line might be a good choose. 结构有点乱好像
(I think in the future, having on-line classes might be the better choice for student.)
但我这样会不会不够“口语”?
2017-11-01 16:45
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评论 1 楼: 谢评~辛苦- -
2017-11-01 16:48
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评论 1 楼: 我是读者说的=  =待会我把脱稿的补上2333333
2017-11-01 16:54
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评论 3 楼: 哈哈哈~完了这下我以后也不能不脱稿了...
2017-11-01 16:56
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