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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# To this statement, I think students will still have class in traditional classroom buildings.
First, Teachers and students stay together in a building that is a more efficient way.
I mean students could ask their questions at once and teachers could remind students who are distracting.
But having classes on internet, there’s almost no chances.
And what’s more, putting students in a classroom could give their a chance to communicate with each other.
Making some close friend and Learning how to be a nice person. It’s very important.
However, if students have classes on the internet, they can’t talk face-to-face. You know, people need some true feeling, not cold internet.
So these are the reasons why I think students will still have a class in a traditional building.
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2017-11-01 09:59:05 来自 口语喵
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心得:听起来...还是很像念稿子= =,我觉得数字少一点估计抑扬顿挫会好一点
2017-11-01 10:01
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语音方面:
语速适中,不错。听起来感觉你有些紧张,而且有些赶,ask念错了。还是要注意语音中辅音和辅音的失爆规则,辅音和元音之间的连读规则等。这些规则掌握了,你的语速自然会快,也不会像现在这样,听起来很赶。这种情况下,当然听不出你的语调等等了。学习语音课。
You know, people need some true feeling, not cold internet.

逻辑素材:
素材可以,也有一两句话例子对观点的支持。但是这些details之间要有连接词去过渡,让观点和例子之间更紧密,这样会让考官更容易理解。
what’s more, putting students in a classroom could give their a chance to communicate with each other.
Making some close friend and Learning how to be a nice person. It’s very important.
what’s more, putting students in a classroom could give them a chance to communicate with each other. For example, they could learn how to be a nice person and even make some close friends.

语言方面:
语法知识结构不错,但要注意代词宾格、主格的应用。
And what’s more, putting students in a classroom could give their a chance to communicate with each other.
这个句子里their应该用them;
Making some close friend and Learning how to be a nice person. It’s very important.
It指代有歧义;
However, if students have classes on the internet, they can’t talk face-to-face. You know, people need some true feeling, not cold internet.这句话转折的内容和上句重复了,建议去听贾老师方法课,学习如何转折。
True feelings,the cold internet特指学习时用的计算机授课形式。
So these are the reasons why I think students will still have a class in a traditional building. To this statement,啰嗦。
2017-11-01 18:25
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评论 2 楼: 好的,谢谢老师!
2017-11-01 19:58
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