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口语喵第 35 期 Day 3
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 3# To answer this question, I think that in the future students will take lessons online. The reason I support, you know, it’s more convenient for students to study online. Just think about it, you can just stay at home and open your computer but if you have class in traditional classroom buildings, you need to go to the bus station, waiting the bus, and then go to the school. What a difficult and inconvenient way for students study. And also, in this way, since we don’t need to buy some real books, we can save a lot of money to buy somethings more useful such as some gifts for our family.
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2017-11-01 09:36:22 来自 口语喵
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2017-11-01 18:25
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语音方面:

一部分单词发音不太准确,例如 inconvenient 和 opinion,这两个单词音发的很奇怪,需

要纠正一下

语音语调的模仿还需要加强,目前还无法完全掌握正确的语调起伏和意群之间的停顿断句。

这个还要在五步精听环节多多练习。

连读现象有一些,但不是十分明显,同样也是在五步精听环节中继续加强。

逻辑素材

文题对应很好,有例子有对比,逻辑方面基本没有什么问题

语言表达:

第二句话这里,当你把 you know 这个插入语拿掉之后,会发现这句话是有语法问题的。

就像这样

The reason I support it’s more convenient for students to study online.

所以建议改成: The reason is that most students would find it more convenient to study online.

Just think about it, you can just stay at home and open your computer but if you have class

in traditional classroom buildings, you need to go to the bus station, waiting the bus, and

then go to the school. 对于在线下学习的表达用法欠妥,可以改成 but for offline classes,

you’ll need to …

What a difficult and inconvenient way for students (to) study. And also, in this way, since we

don’t need to buy some real books, we can save a lot of money to buy somethings more

useful, such as some gifts for our family.
2017-11-01 18:26
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谢谢老师点评~😀

1.inconvenient 和 opinion 是突然间卡住了... 不知道为什么. 可能没有怎么念习惯,谢谢老师纠正~

2.The reason is that most students would find it more convenient to study online. 
学到了~ 原来之前一直在用那个错误表达orz... 谢谢老师~

3.老师,像这类task2题目,是不是都要让步呐,我记得贾老师好像说需要让步,好像还说过如果可以的话,task1-task6 都可以让步orz?
2017-11-02 09:20
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评论 3 楼: 2 是必须要让步。1 如果是采取论证的方法阐述,最好也要让步。3和5可以看情况,让不让都可以。4和6是没有让步的。
2017-11-02 17:58
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