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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2#
【作业一】
为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。
去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程。
【作业二】
请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。
另外,年纪大一点的人身体状况和精力不如年轻人,而出国旅游往往伴随着长时间的乘坐各种交通工具的时间,这样的话身体可能都吃不消。去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程,有时还要承担身体出问题的风险。而在这方面,我想,年轻人能更好的适应并且很好得享受这个过程。
【作业三】。
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。
1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.
2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.
Although traveling is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.
Interesting as it is, traveling will need snsumption of physical strength and energy.
【作业四】
请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。
Additionally, as for older people, their physical condition is not as good as the young’s, that means the older people are too weak to stand staying on the planet for a long time; while going abroad are always accompanied with long journey. Last year, I went to Sri Lanka to take my vacation, spent a whole night at plane and can hardly sleep well. Most of the older people, traveling with me, complained about the situation and some of them felt uncomfortable. In fact, too much consumption of energy can lead the old people to a dangerous situation. From this aspect, I think, the youth will totally adapt to any change and enjoy the whole process.
2017-10-31 23:23:56 来自 托福作文咩
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内容方面:感觉第一句要点题,直接说出支持观点的理由。最后一句是总结,再次重申观点。第二句的staying on the planet感觉有点奇怪。 can hardly sleep well中can应该改为could。例子可以更详细些。加油。
2017-10-31 23:42
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评论 1 楼: 我好像一直都是不点题,啰嗦的毛病。。。plane……手误打错了。。。后面的时态确实有问题。谢谢!
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【作业一】[br]为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。[br]今年夏天,我和导师去美国开会,正好有一天的空闲时间去玩。由于他之前得过癌症,刚看了二三个风景,太毫无力气了,只能回酒店休息,而和其他同学所有想去的都去了,老师充满羡慕的表情。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。身体是革命的本钱,没有好的身体,无法享受旅游的乐。今年夏天,我和导师去美国开会,正好有一天的空闲出去玩。由于年龄大了,刚看了一两出风景,就毫无力气了,最后只能回酒店休息,老师充满遗憾的表情,而我把所有想去的去了。年龄大了,各项体能都跟不上了,像出国旅游这样需要很轻体力的活动很难完成,无法体味到旅游的乐趣,所以旅游要趁年轻。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]1, Although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.[br]2, Interesting as it is, travelling abroad will need consumption of physical strength and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]Secondly, travelling abroad needs a good physical condition.Although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy. The body is the capital of revolution, there is no way to enjoy travelling without health. In this summer, we have a chance to travel for one day during the meeting in America. Because of the age,my tutor was exhausted after going even two places and had to go back to hotel with an expression of disappointment on his face. However, I could enjoy what I hungered for. Take the body of old with weak physical condition into consideration, it is very hard to enjoy the activities which required much energy like travelling abroad. So, we had better travel to foreign countries when we are young.[br]
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