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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2#
【作业一】
为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。
去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程。
【作业二】
请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。
另外,年纪大一点的人身体状况和精力不如年轻人,而出国旅游往往伴随着长时间的乘坐各种交通工具的时间,这样的话身体可能都吃不消。去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程,有时还要承担身体出问题的风险。而在这方面,我想,年轻人能更好的适应并且很好得享受这个过程。
【作业三】。
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。
1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.
2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.
Although traveling is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.
Interesting as it is, traveling will need snsumption of physical strength and energy.
【作业四】
请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。
Additionally, as for older people, their physical condition is not as good as the young’s, that means the older people are too weak to stand staying on the planet for a long time; while going abroad are always accompanied with long journey. Last year, I went to Sri Lanka to take my vacation, spent a whole night at plane and can hardly sleep well. Most of the older people, traveling with me, complained about the situation and some of them felt uncomfortable. In fact, too much consumption of energy can lead the old people to a dangerous situation. From this aspect, I think, the youth will totally adapt to any change and enjoy the whole process.
2017-10-31 23:23:56 来自 托福作文咩
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内容方面:感觉第一句要点题,直接说出支持观点的理由。最后一句是总结,再次重申观点。第二句的staying on the planet感觉有点奇怪。 can hardly sleep well中can应该改为could。例子可以更详细些。加油。
2017-10-31 23:42
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评论 1 楼: 我好像一直都是不点题,啰嗦的毛病。。。plane……手误打错了。。。后面的时态确实有问题。谢谢!
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【作业一、二】[br]此外,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻人往往体力好身体相对健康,更能体会到游玩的乐趣。以我自己为例,有一次在国外旅游的时候我生病了,而在国外玩的行程排的很满,整整好几天我都感觉不到游玩的乐趣只能躺在宾馆休息,看着小伙伴玩的很开心。年轻人尚且如此,老年人抵抗力差容易生病,而且往往腿脚不好,难以承受大量的户外活动。除此之外,老年人往往肠胃和牙口也有一些问题,不容易适应国外完全不同的饮食。所以,年轻人更适合出国旅游。[br]【作业三】[br]1.Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume stamina and energy.[br]2.Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of stamina and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]In addition, traveling abroad needs a good body. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need a great consumption of stamina and energy. Young people usually have stronger and healthier body, and people in great states may appreciate the interests of traveling better than those who are older or not totally healthy. Take myself as an example, once during my travel to Singapore, unfortunately, I caught a cold and there was a full schedule. The only matter I could do is to sleep and rest in the hotel without experience the interest of travel abroad, while my healthy peers had a great time. So it is with young people, the resistance of older people is poor and they are easier to get sick. What's more, most of older people has some movement problems or poor function of digestive system, which means it is hard for them to conduct lots of outdoor activities and get accustomed to totally different eating habit in a foreign country. As a consequence, we had better travel to foreign counties when we are young.
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