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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# 【作业一】
For instance, as a young man, travelling by myself will give me the freedom of arranging a compact schedule. By myself, I can go to a lot of places in one day, visiting all the places a want to visit in the city. But with my parents, walking for 5 minutes and stopping for 10 seems like the only option.
【作业二】
I prefer travelling at a young age. Travelling requires good body conditions. For instance, as a fit young man, travelling by myself will give me the freedom of arranging a compact schedule. By myself, I can go to a lot of places in one day, visiting all the places a want to visit in the city. But with my parents, walking for 5 minutes and stopping for 10 seems like the only option. Walking non-stop clearly needs good stamina and body conditions, which isn't a common feature among older people. The older you get, probably the worse your body will get, since health is a major factor of a fun trip, I think we shouldn't waste our time and wait for our body to get worse and then travel.

【作业三】
1. Although travelling abroad is a lot of fun, it will consume both physical and mental power.
2. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad need consumption of both physical and mental power.
2017-10-31 23:02:59 来自 托福作文咩
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1. 有逻辑
    有主题,但是和题目有些偏离

2.语法  没有问题

3.用词

今天一个很大的问题:今天的要求是出国旅行需要很好的身体素质,你的例子没有很好切合主题,有些偏题了。

建议:再看一下任务卡的要求,思考一下

但是用词语法方面没有问题😊

2017-10-31 23:17
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评论 1 楼: 谢谢
2017-10-31 23:19
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