雅婷小果酱 楼主
10-31
口语喵第 35 期 Day 2
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 2# The Spring Festival is my most favorite festival, because it’s time for family gathering. And the Spring Festival is a new start of a year. It brings me hope and courage. On Spring Festival, my parents usually take me back to my hometown. My hometown is a small town.and many of my relatives are getting together.we share our life and care about each other.of course.the big meal is necessary. ​​​They all cook their specialty dishes. Therefore, our meals are always delicious. We often stay at home for three days and then we leave with others’ wishes. I like the Spring Festival, because I like family gathering. ​​​
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2017-10-31 21:48:00 来自 口语喵
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1 楼
整个语音语调感觉非常棒 就是到最后好像有点紧张? and 比较多
2017-10-31 22:30
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内容方面:逻辑方面:感觉第二句与你要表达的观点有点不是很相关,或者说是讲得太少了。句子略显简单,但口语的句子一般不要求太复杂。一些单词用得很好,比如specialty dishes。没有看出语法错误。
 语音语调:发音很棒,第一句的gathering感觉应该是降调,如楼上所说,通篇and略多,能够明显听出紧张。倒数第二的leave发的leaving。后半部分的停顿需要注意。加油。
2017-10-31 22:42
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