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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# Assignment 1
例如,我的父母如果有时间就会出国旅行,去了很多很远的地方。而我的外婆由于身体原因,无法承受长距离飞行,即使有时间旅游,也只会选择在一些距离较近的地方。
Assignment 2
其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。并且大多都需要乘坐飞机,年纪大的人由于身体原因,无法承受长时间飞行,而年轻人则不用考虑这种问题。我的父母如果有时间就会出国旅行,去了很多很远的地方。而我的外婆虽然也很喜欢旅行,但由于心脏病只能选择一些距离较近的地方,并且老年人也不适合长时间走路。我自己很喜欢尝试那些刺激的活动,如果年轻的时候有机会就要去多多尝试,如果等到年纪大了,身体状况就无法承受高强度的活动了,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
Assignment 3
Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strengths and energies.
Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical strengths and energies.
Assignment 4
Secondly, traveling abroad requires good health. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical strengths and energies. In most situations, we have to go by plane. However, old people can’t stand a long flight due to their physical conditions. While young people don’t need to consider this problem. For example. My parents prefer traveling overseas when they have time and they had been gone to lots of countries even they are far from my home. In contrast, my grandma can only choose places near her place because of heart disease and failing to walk for a long time although she also like to go to far places. Personally, I’d like to try something exciting. If you have a chance to engage new things, just grab it. Otherwise, you can’t afford high intensity activities when you are older. That’s why I choose to travel abroad when I am young.
2017-10-31 17:31:15 来自 托福作文咩
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观点,理由,理由论据例子例子解释都有,很符合侃哥教得。语法:没有错误。这次语句比昨天读起来顺畅得多,词语用的恰当。你的句子有些过长也不符合通常的习惯,需要积累句型。
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【作业一】[br]去年我们全家出国旅游。因为我们很兴奋很开心,所以我们打算每天花很多时间到处走走。但是奶奶却很让我们失望,因为她身体不好,所以为了照顾她,我们总是要休息。作为一个精力充沛的年轻人,我很想尝试不同的东西,但是考虑到奶奶的身体,我不得不放弃我的娱乐活动。[br]【作业二】[br]出国旅游需要好的身体。虽然出国旅游十分有意思,它可以带给人很多乐趣,但同时它也很消耗体力和精力。年轻人可以很疯狂地玩,但大部分老年人只能体验很少的东西。比如,去年我们全家出国旅游。因为我们很兴奋很开心,所以我们打算每天花很多时间到处走走。但是奶奶却很让我们失望,因为她身体不好,所以为了照顾她,我们总是要休息。作为一个精力充沛的年轻人,我很想尝试不同的东西,但是考虑到奶奶的身体,我不得不放弃我的娱乐活动。我的良好的身体支持我去完美的旅游,但老人太弱了以至于不能体验很多。所以我觉得年轻的时候去出国旅游是很好的。[br]【作业三】[br]Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume strenghth and energy[br]Interesting as it is , traveling abroad need comsumption of strength and energy[br]【作业四】[br]A good body is essential to traveling abroad which is very interesting beacuse it is of great fun, while it consumes strength and energy. The young can enjoy the travel, but most of the older only feel a little. For instance, my famliy went abroad last year. With excitement and happiness, we planed to spend much time going around. Unexpectedly, my grandmother was too weak to walk all day and we had to relaxed with her to take care of her well. As a energetic young person, I prefer to see more. However, considering my grandmother, I must look after her instead of having fun. My healthy body support me to travel and old people are so weak that they can't feel a lot. So I think it is wise to travel abroad when we are young.
[br]【作业一】[br]为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。[br]去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]另外,年纪大一点的人身体状况和精力不如年轻人,而出国旅游往往伴随着长时间的乘坐各种交通工具的时间,这样的话身体可能都吃不消。去年去了斯里兰卡,一路上需要做长达7.8个小时的飞机,并且由于旅游地点的原因需要长时间做汽车,当时旅游团里年龄稍微大一些的都在抱怨这次行程的辛苦,对于他们而言,由于身体和精力原因可能难以充分享受旅程,有时还要承担身体出问题的风险。而在这方面,我想,年轻人能更好的适应并且很好得享受这个过程。[br]【作业三】。[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.[br]2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.[br]Although traveling is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.[br]Interesting as it is, traveling will need snsumption of physical strength and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。[br]Additionally, as for older people, their physical condition is not as good as the young’s, that means the older people are too weak to stand staying on the planet for a long time; while going abroad are always accompanied with long journey. Last year, I went to Sri Lanka to take my vacation, spent a whole night at plane and can hardly sleep well. Most of the older people, traveling with me, complained about the situation and some of them felt uncomfortable. In fact, too much consumption of energy can lead the old people to a dangerous situation. From this aspect, I think, the youth will totally adapt to any change and enjoy the whole process.
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