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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# Assignment 1
例如,我的父母如果有时间就会出国旅行,去了很多很远的地方。而我的外婆由于身体原因,无法承受长距离飞行,即使有时间旅游,也只会选择在一些距离较近的地方。
Assignment 2
其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。并且大多都需要乘坐飞机,年纪大的人由于身体原因,无法承受长时间飞行,而年轻人则不用考虑这种问题。我的父母如果有时间就会出国旅行,去了很多很远的地方。而我的外婆虽然也很喜欢旅行,但由于心脏病只能选择一些距离较近的地方,并且老年人也不适合长时间走路。我自己很喜欢尝试那些刺激的活动,如果年轻的时候有机会就要去多多尝试,如果等到年纪大了,身体状况就无法承受高强度的活动了,所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游。
Assignment 3
Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strengths and energies.
Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical strengths and energies.
Assignment 4
Secondly, traveling abroad requires good health. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical strengths and energies. In most situations, we have to go by plane. However, old people can’t stand a long flight due to their physical conditions. While young people don’t need to consider this problem. For example. My parents prefer traveling overseas when they have time and they had been gone to lots of countries even they are far from my home. In contrast, my grandma can only choose places near her place because of heart disease and failing to walk for a long time although she also like to go to far places. Personally, I’d like to try something exciting. If you have a chance to engage new things, just grab it. Otherwise, you can’t afford high intensity activities when you are older. That’s why I choose to travel abroad when I am young.
2017-10-31 17:31:15 来自 托福作文咩
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观点,理由,理由论据例子例子解释都有,很符合侃哥教得。语法:没有错误。这次语句比昨天读起来顺畅得多,词语用的恰当。你的句子有些过长也不符合通常的习惯,需要积累句型。
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我的叔叔在退休后,有很多时间,于是开始去国外旅游,但是回来或他告诉我他很不开心,因为他糟糕的身体条件难以跟上子女的节奏,通常玩一段时间他就需要休息,而且更为伤心的是,有很多活动因为的年纪也不可以参加,他能做的只有远远的观望和拍照,而这些照片充满他的遗憾。[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。好的身体是一切的基础。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。我的叔叔在退休后,有很多时间,于是开始去国外旅游,但是回来或他告诉我他很不开心,因为他糟糕的身体条件难以跟上子女的节奏,通常玩一段时间他就需要休息,而且更为伤心的是,有很多活动因为的年纪也不可以参加,他能做的只有远远的观望和拍照,而这些照片充满了他的遗憾。因此趁我们还年轻有时间和精力,不要浪费这些赐予我们的机会,否则留给你的就只有遗憾了。[br]although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume stongth and energy.[br]interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of strongth and energy.[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。好的身体是一切的基础。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。我的叔叔在退休后,有很多时间,于是开始去国外旅游,但是回来或他告诉我他很不开心,因为他糟糕的身体条件难以跟上子女的节奏,通常玩一段时间他就需要休息,而且更为伤心的是,有很多活动因为的年纪也不可以参加,他能做的只有远远的观望和拍照,而这些照片充满了他的遗憾。因此趁我们还年轻有时间和精力,不要浪费这些赐予我们的机会,否则留给你的就只有遗憾了。[br]In addition, traveling abroad requires a good body. Everything is based on a healthy body. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of a large amount of strength and energy. You can enjoy the beauty of landscape and the fun of the activities in your young time, while it seems not possible when you are old. A good case in point is my uncle. When he was retired, he started to travel abroad with his family. However, after returning he told me that he was totally upset for he just could not catch up with his offspring's peace owing to his bad health condition. And what's worse, there were a lot of activities he could not take part in. the only thing he could do is taking pictures which teemed with his regret.So just enjoy your youth and go or the only thing left for you is pity.
【作业一】[br]比如,我的爷爷奶奶退休后身体就非常不好,他们每天不能有太多的运动,甚至走一公里需要休息一天。因为心脏不太好的的原因,不能坐飞机,而出国旅游一般需要一整天的飞行了,他们身体吃不消,所以即使有心出游,身体条件却不能支持他们的愿望。[br]【作业二】[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然能带来很多乐趣,但也是一件很耗体力和精力的事,如果没有一个好的身体,就很难玩得尽兴。比如,我的爷爷奶奶退休后身体就非常不好,他们每天不能有太多的运动,甚至走一公里需要休息一天。因为心脏不太好的的原因,不能坐飞机,而出国旅游一般需要一整天的飞行了,他们身体吃不消,所以即使有心出游,身体条件却不能支持他们的愿望。如果老了以后没有一个好的身体,旅游就变成了一件有心无力的事,甚至身体条件限制都不能够出国旅游。[br]【作业三】[br]1. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical and mental energy.[br]2. Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical and mental energy.[br]【作业四】[br]Second, traveling abroad needs a strong body. Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical and mental energy. We could not enjoy ourselves without a good body condition. For example, my grandparents have a bad body condition after retirement. For this reason, they could not do any extra exercise, even a mile of walk requiring one-day rest. Furthermore, they cannot take airplane because of heart disease. However, traveling abroad would cost at least 24 hours on flight, which is impossible for them to do it. As a result, though my grandparents desire to go sighting to foreign countries, their body condition ruins their desire. If our bodies are not in good condition in the future, traveling abroad will bring more troubles than pleasure, and our body even couldn’t afford such a long distance activity.[br]
【作业一、二】[br]出国旅游的前提之一是你的身体要好。毕竟,出国虽然好玩儿,但很耗费体力和精力。年轻人,精力旺盛,他们能够有更多的机会去接触新奇、有趣的事物,与老年人相比。比如,当我的舅舅和姥姥去年去泰国玩的时候,我的舅舅潜水、爬山等玩得很尽兴,而我的姥姥只是坐在岸边,注视着周围的风景。有时她甚至不得不在酒店里待一整天。从这个角度来讲,我坚持这一点当我们还年轻的时候出去旅游要比年老体衰时出去玩更明智。[br]【作业三】[br]1.Although traveling abroad will be of great fun, it will consume strength and energy.[br]2.Interesting as it is, traveling to other countries will need consumption of physical and mental activities.[br]【作业四】[br]One of the preconditions of Traveling to foreign countries is that you are healthy. After all, interesting as it is, traveling abroad will consume strength and energy. Being full of energy, the young may have more chance to embrace exotic and interesting things than the old. For example, when my uncle and my grandmother went to the Thailand last year, my uncle enjoyed diving and climbing,while what my grandma did was just sitting on the beach and watched beautiful scenery around her. Sometimes, she even had to stay in the hotel for the whole day. From the angle, I insist the view that taking a trip abroad when we are still young is wiser than does that while we become old and senile.
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【作业一】[br]为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。[br]有一次 我去澳洲玩,本来计划了有潜水观看海洋动物的,但是因为我妈妈身体的问题,不能去潜水,我也只能选择坐船游览风光。 [br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]出国旅游需要好的身体。国有一些娱乐项目比较特别,对身体状况有严格的要求。年轻时身体好才能玩,老了去玩可能会有危险。有一次,我去澳洲玩,本来计划了有潜水观看海洋动物的,但是因为我妈妈身体的不好,导游建议我们不去潜水,我也只能选择坐玻璃底船看海样动物。如果我妈在年轻十岁,我们就能去潜水啦。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]Although traveling abroad can be of great fun, it will consume strength and energy[br]Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of strength and energy[br]【作业四】[br]请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。[br]Traveling abroad needs to be very healthy. Some foreign entertainment facilities are very special, it may have a strict requirement for your strength and energy. Young people in good health can enjoy it, while the older may be dangerous when doing it. Once I went to A with my mom. We did have a plan to go under water and see the wild marine life. Our guide, however, suggested us not to go, because of my mom’s body is so good. We changed the plan and went to take the boat with a glass on the hull. We could go diving if mom was ten years younger. [br]

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