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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# 【作业一】
出国旅游一般需要坐很长时间的飞机和汽车,路途遥远,过程辛苦,会花费很多的精力和体力。去年暑假,我们和奶奶一起去欧洲玩,奶奶的腿走一会儿就累了,经常需要休息,之后的几天,她就经常在酒店周围转转。
【作业二】
其次,到国外旅游需要健康的身体。出国旅游可以让我们享受视听盛宴,但是长途跋涉,路途坎坷,常常会花费很多的精力和体力。举个例子,去年暑假我们和奶奶一起去欧洲玩,长时间的飞机让奶奶很疲惫,路程稍长,奶奶的腿就会犯困,经常需要休息,之后的几天,她就经常在酒店周围转转,小范围欣赏一下风土人情。而我每天都去参观不同的景点,回来给奶奶看照片并进行讲解。因此出国旅游对身体是一场巨大的考验,我们要趁年轻去旅行。
【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。
1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.
2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.
1.Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical and mental energy.
2.Interesting as it, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical and mental energy.
【作业四】
请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。
In addition, good health is the foundation of traveling abroad. There is no doubt that traveling abroad is nothing but a visual feast. However, it takes too much physical and mental energy so that not everyone could feel up to such a long journey especially for old people. Take my grandma for instance, we had a short-time trip last summer holiday, but her leg often felt sleepy as long as the distance got a little longer.Thus, her range of activities were confined to the surrounding of the hotel next several days while I spend a large amount of time to visit places of interest and introduced the scenes to her everyday. Thus, traveling abroad is a severe trial for our body and we should traveling across the world when we are young.
2017-10-31 17:30:23 来自 托福作文咩
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1 结构清晰 例子切题 语句地道 长短结合 无明显语法错误
2 需要注意 时间的介词使用,连接词的多样化使用

3 存在的亮点词如下

-- be fondation of 👍

-- there is no doubt that 👍

-- nothing but 👍

-- too much 。so that not。。(是不是可以永恒这个替换。too .....to...)

-- but her leg(unfortunately 代替 but 是不是会更接地气)

-- next several days (我看到tpo里一般都有用 rest several days)

-- while I spend(可不可以用 compare with my grandmather I spend .... 代替)







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作业一:[br]今年夏天,我和导师去韩国开会,正好友一天的空闲时间去玩。由于他之前得过癌症,刚看了二三个风景,太毫无力气了,只能回酒店,而和其他同学所有想去的都去了,老师充满羡慕的表情。[br]作业二[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。旅游需要走很多路,更何况出国需要更多的精力。身体是革命的本钱,没有好的身体,无法享受旅游的乐。今年夏天,我和导师去韩国开会,正好有一天的空闲出去玩。由于年龄大了,刚看了一两出风景,就毫无力气了,最后只能回酒店,而我把所有想去的去了,老师充满羡慕的表情。年龄大了,各项体能都跟不上了,像出国旅游这样需要很轻体力的活动很难完成,无法体味到旅游的乐趣,所以旅游要趁年轻。[br]作业三:[br]1, Although travel abroad is of great of fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.[br]2, Interesting as it is, travel abroad will need consumption of physical strength and energy.[br]作业四:[br]Secondly, travel abroad need good physical condition. Tour inland need to walk a long way, let along abroad, which require more energy. The body is the capital of revolution, there is no way to enjoy travel without health. In this summer, we have a chance to travel for one day during the meeting in South Korea. Because of the age,my tutor has been exhausted after going one or two place and have to go back to hotel with An expression of admiration on his face. However, I can enjoy what I hunger for. Take the body of old with weak physical condition, it is very hard to enjoy the activities required much energy like travel abroad. so, you had better travel to foreign countries when you are young rather than when you are older.[br]
【作业一】[br]为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。[br]去年我们去日本,在富士山那天下雨了,雨中的风景很特别,但是姥姥怕滑倒没有下车。后来我在环球影城痛快地玩了一天,还暴走了许多想去的景点。姥姥就只能在酒店休息,在附近转转,和我们一起吃吃饭。[br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然很好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。年轻时体力好可以好好玩,年纪大了出去旅游就不太方便。去年我们去日本,在富士山那天下雨了,雨中的风景很特别,但是姥姥怕滑倒没有下车。后来我在环球影城痛快地玩了一天,还暴走了许多想去的景点。姥姥就只能在酒店休息,在附近转转,和我们一起吃吃饭。虽然也很好,但是有很多活动她再不可能尝试了。如果不抓住机会在年轻的时候出国旅游,等年纪大了,身体的限制就特别多,难以承受。所以我更喜欢年轻的时候出国旅游,尽可能地多一些体验。[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.[br]2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.[br](1)Although traveling aborad is of great fun, it will consume strength and energy.[br](2)Interesting as it is, traveling aborad will need consumption of strength and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。[br]Secondly, traveling abroad requires good health. Interesting as it is, traveling aborad will need consumption of strength and energy.When you are young, you can have good physical strength enjoying your traveling. While you are old,it will become incovenient in many ways. Last year we went to Japan. It rained on the day when we visited Mount Fuji. The scenery in the rain was very special, but my grandma was afraid of slipping down and was not getting out of the bus. In the following days, I had good time playing in the universal studios, and went through a lot of scenic spots. Howeve,my grandma could only rest at the hotel ,walk around leisurely and have dinner with us.Though she was happy,It still was a pity she couldn’t try what we experienced. If you don't size the chance to travel abroad when you are young, you will have a lot of limitations on your body when you are old, and many activities will be hard to bear. So I prefer to travel abroad when I am young, embrace as many experiences as possible.[br]
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