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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# 【作业一】
出国旅游一般需要坐很长时间的飞机和汽车,路途遥远,过程辛苦,会花费很多的精力和体力。去年暑假,我们和奶奶一起去欧洲玩,奶奶的腿走一会儿就累了,经常需要休息,之后的几天,她就经常在酒店周围转转。
【作业二】
其次,到国外旅游需要健康的身体。出国旅游可以让我们享受视听盛宴,但是长途跋涉,路途坎坷,常常会花费很多的精力和体力。举个例子,去年暑假我们和奶奶一起去欧洲玩,长时间的飞机让奶奶很疲惫,路程稍长,奶奶的腿就会犯困,经常需要休息,之后的几天,她就经常在酒店周围转转,小范围欣赏一下风土人情。而我每天都去参观不同的景点,回来给奶奶看照片并进行讲解。因此出国旅游对身体是一场巨大的考验,我们要趁年轻去旅行。
【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。
1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.
2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.
1.Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical and mental energy.
2.Interesting as it, traveling abroad will need consumption of physical and mental energy.
【作业四】
请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。
In addition, good health is the foundation of traveling abroad. There is no doubt that traveling abroad is nothing but a visual feast. However, it takes too much physical and mental energy so that not everyone could feel up to such a long journey especially for old people. Take my grandma for instance, we had a short-time trip last summer holiday, but her leg often felt sleepy as long as the distance got a little longer.Thus, her range of activities were confined to the surrounding of the hotel next several days while I spend a large amount of time to visit places of interest and introduced the scenes to her everyday. Thus, traveling abroad is a severe trial for our body and we should traveling across the world when we are young.
2017-10-31 17:30:23 来自 托福作文咩
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1 结构清晰 例子切题 语句地道 长短结合 无明显语法错误
2 需要注意 时间的介词使用,连接词的多样化使用

3 存在的亮点词如下

-- be fondation of 👍

-- there is no doubt that 👍

-- nothing but 👍

-- too much 。so that not。。(是不是可以永恒这个替换。too .....to...)

-- but her leg(unfortunately 代替 but 是不是会更接地气)

-- next several days (我看到tpo里一般都有用 rest several days)

-- while I spend(可不可以用 compare with my grandmather I spend .... 代替)







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