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#托福作文咩第 28 期 Day 2# 【作业一】
为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。
今年夏天,我和导师去美国开会,正好有一天的空闲时间去玩。由于他之前得过癌症,刚看了二三个风景,太毫无力气了,只能回酒店休息,而和其他同学所有想去的都去了,老师充满羡慕的表情。
【作业二】
请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。
其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。身体是革命的本钱,没有好的身体,无法享受旅游的乐。今年夏天,我和导师去美国开会,正好有一天的空闲出去玩。由于年龄大了,刚看了一两出风景,就毫无力气了,最后只能回酒店休息,老师充满遗憾的表情,而我把所有想去的去了。年龄大了,各项体能都跟不上了,像出国旅游这样需要很轻体力的活动很难完成,无法体味到旅游的乐趣,所以旅游要趁年轻。
【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。
1, Although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy.
2, Interesting as it is, travelling abroad will need consumption of physical strength and energy.
【作业四】
Secondly, travelling abroad needs a good physical condition.Although travelling abroad is of great fun, it will consume physical strength and energy. The body is the capital of revolution, there is no way to enjoy travelling without health. In this summer, we have a chance to travel for one day during the meeting in America. Because of the age,my tutor was exhausted after going even two places and had to go back to hotel with an expression of disappointment on his face. However, I could enjoy what I hungered for. Take the body of old with weak physical condition into consideration, it is very hard to enjoy the activities which required much energy like travelling abroad. So, we had better travel to foreign countries when we are young.
2017-10-31 17:06:50 来自 托福作文咩
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恩~很棒,用了很多句式。条理清晰,逻辑准确。
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【作业一】[br]为什么出国旅游需要好的身体,请举出一个相关的例子。[br]例如,去年我的家人去了日本。 由于日本的气候和食物差异很大。 我的祖母变得不舒服,所以她没能和我们一起去当地游玩,而是留在酒店。 可真可惜!.[br]【作业二】[br]请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]有趣的是,出国旅游需要消耗力量和精力。 确实,出国旅游不仅是一种娱乐,而且还是一种运动。 只有健康,强壮的身体才能让我们有机会看到美丽的风景,玩得开心,享受我们的旅行时光。 参加长途飞行,公共汽车或火车游览的旅行,肯定没有呆在家的舒适。 而对与我们的年轻人来说,通常更适合,因为饮食限制较少,可以享受比老年人更多的活动,而不用担心生病或受伤。 例如,去年我的家人去了日本。 由于日本的气候和食物差异很大。 我的祖母变得不舒服,所以她没能和我们一起去当地游玩,而是留在酒店。 可真可惜!.[br]【作业三】[br]请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:出国旅游虽然好玩儿,但是也很耗费体力和精力。[br]1.Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.[br]2.Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.[br]Although travel abroad is of great fun, it will consume strength and energy.[br]Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of strength and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。[br]Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of strength and energy. Actually, traveling abroad is not only an entertainment, but also a kind of exercise. Only can health and strong body give us a chance to see beautiful scenery, have fun and enjoy our traveling time. Going on a trip that involves long flights, bus or train rides, having to make do without certain comforts of home. Our younger people are generally fitter, have fewer dietary restrictions and can enjoy more types of activities than older ones without worrying about falling sick or getting injured. For instance, my family had a trip to Japan last year. Since the climate and foods is quite different in Japan. My grandmother became unwell so that she was unable to visit the local place with us, but stay at hotel. What a pity thing! [br]
【作业一、二】[br]出国旅游的前提之一是你的身体要好。毕竟,出国虽然好玩儿,但很耗费体力和精力。年轻人,精力旺盛,他们能够有更多的机会去接触新奇、有趣的事物,与老年人相比。比如,当我的舅舅和姥姥去年去泰国玩的时候,我的舅舅潜水、爬山等玩得很尽兴,而我的姥姥只是坐在岸边,注视着周围的风景。有时她甚至不得不在酒店里待一整天。从这个角度来讲,我坚持这一点当我们还年轻的时候出去旅游要比年老体衰时出去玩更明智。[br]【作业三】[br]1.Although traveling abroad will be of great fun, it will consume strength and energy.[br]2.Interesting as it is, traveling to other countries will need consumption of physical and mental activities.[br]【作业四】[br]One of the preconditions of Traveling to foreign countries is that you are healthy. After all, interesting as it is, traveling abroad will consume strength and energy. Being full of energy, the young may have more chance to embrace exotic and interesting things than the old. For example, when my uncle and my grandmother went to the Thailand last year, my uncle enjoyed diving and climbing,while what my grandma did was just sitting on the beach and watched beautiful scenery around her. Sometimes, she even had to stay in the hotel for the whole day. From the angle, I insist the view that taking a trip abroad when we are still young is wiser than does that while we become old and senile.
【作业一】[br]去年,奶奶去欧洲玩,每天都要参观一个国家,因为国家之间有一定的路程,所以每天有几乎花一半时间花在坐飞机,做大巴这样交通工具上。因为奶奶年纪大了,体力没有年轻时好了。因为旅途的颠簸和紧张的行程,我奶奶回国后就大病一场。。[br]【作业二】[br]其次,出国旅行需要好的身体。一般去出国旅行,行程会安排的很满,没有好的身体不能顺利完成旅行。年轻时体力好,可以承受长途的交通和游玩消耗的体力,但是年纪大了很可能在旅行中出现身体问题。去年,奶奶去欧洲玩,每天都要参观一个国家,因为国家之间有一定的路程,所以每天有几乎花一半时间花在坐飞机,做大巴这样交通工具上。因为奶奶年纪大了,体力没有年轻时好了。因为旅途的颠簸和紧张的行程,我奶奶回国后就大病一场。因为我我的梦想是可以在每个国家旅游,这需要耗费很大的精力和体力。我认为年轻人体力好这个梦想很容易实现,要是等我老了再去实现,恐怕身体会难以承受。所以,我更喜欢年轻时出国旅游。[br]【作业三】[br]1 Although traveling in abroad is of great fun, it will consume energy no matter in physical and mental.[br]2 Interesting as it is, traveling in abroad will need concemption of physical and mental energy.[br]【作业四】[br]Besides, a energy body is necessary for traveling in othercountry. Generally, there are lots of viev sites in the trivaling list that we plant to visit. So a strong body is really important. The youngery can more likely to endur this full trip than order. Because the older people always have several problems in their health, accordingly they may ill aftere the trip. Last year, my grandma toke part in a trip to visiting 8 country in Europe. Although the senery is of great fun, it was consume physical and mental energy. Because of the full list and heavy translation, finally, my grandmother got a serious illness aftere this trip. For me, a young girl, whose dream is to travel the whole countries in the world. I believe it is easy to be achive my dream when I am yong, and I can't think I have a healthy body to let the dream run forty years later. Thus, I wold like to have a trip when I am a yong girl.
【作文题目】[br]Which do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young or when you are older. Give specific reasons or examples to support your decision. [br]【观点】[br]我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]【理由】[br]出国旅游需要好的身体。[br]【作业一】[br]我爷爷年轻的时候操劳了大半辈子,等他退休了觉得有大把的时间可以出国旅游,但是却由于身体原因不适合坐飞机等交通工具而只能选择在国内旅游。[br]【作业二】[br]其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。出国旅游一般都是长途跋涉,要乘坐许多交通工具。年轻的时候一般不会感到旅途的辛苦,但年龄大了就容易感到疲劳,甚至因身体原因不能采用某种交通出行方式。我的爷爷年轻的时候操劳了大半辈子,他一直计划着等他退休了就和奶奶周游全世界,好好的出去旅行,但是他却因为年龄偏大而且有高血压被告知不适合乘坐飞机,这样他就不能去到很远的地方旅行,只能在国内旅行了。年轻的时候我们有着好的身体,想去哪里就可以去哪里,而当我们老了,受到身体素质的影响,很难想走就走,所以我更喜欢在年轻的时候出国旅游。[br]【作业三】[br]1. Although A be of great fun, it will consume B and C.[br]Although traveling aboard is of great fun, it will consume our spirit and energy.[br]2. Interesting as it is, A will need consumption of B and C.[br]Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of spirit and energy.[br]【作业四】[br]On the other hand, although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume our spirit and energy. Traveling abroad is a long journey and we will take a lot of different travel tools like plane, train etc. It is a great pressure for older people if their physical condition is bad compared with young people. They will soon feel tired and because of their physical condition they maybe refused to get into some travel tools. My grandfather, is a very hardworking man during his young age, plans to travel all over the world with my grandmother after retired. But he was rejected to buy a ticket for traveling aboard because of his high age and high blood pressure. He was regret about it and always told us to travel abroad as young as we can. We have a good body when we are young and we can travel anywhere we want. But when we become older, it is difficult for our physical condition to travel without concern.[br]
【1】有次我带着姥姥姥爷去欧洲玩,首先因为时差和气候差异,他们就很难调整过来身体状态去适应,好几天我们都是在宾馆度过的。除此之外,因为身体条件,一些有趣的极限运动他们也不能参与,姥姥就非常羡慕我现在有机会可以尝试跳伞,潜水。[br]【2】其次,出国旅游需要好的身体。因为旅游本身就是是一件非常消耗体力的事,只有我们有旺盛的精力和好的身体条件我们才可以享受一次美好的出国旅行。有次我带着姥姥姥爷去欧洲玩,首先因为时差和气候差异,他们就很难调整过来身体状态去适应,好几天我们都是在宾馆度过的。除此之外,因为身体条件,一些有趣的极限运动他们也不能参与,姥姥就非常羡慕我现在有机会可以尝试跳伞,潜水。所以说,趁着年轻,我们应多走出国门看看大千世界,因为我们现在还很健康,可以尽情的体验年老之后体验不到的事物。[br]【3】Although traveling abroad is of great fun, it will consume lots of energy and vigor.[br] Interesting as it is, traveling abroad will need consumption of energy and vigor.[br]【4】What's more, traveling abroad requires a good health condition. It's because traveling itself is a stuff accompanied by happiness as well as tiredness. Hence, most of us are able to enjoy traveling abroad only when we are healthy and having abundant of energy. Once I took my grandparents to Europe, although they were excited, I found it too hard for them to regulate their body condition to adapt the special climate and time differences. Unfortunately, we spent several days in the hotel for a rest. Besides, elder people lack of energy and vigor to take part in some extreme spots, while my grandma deeply admire my chance and courage of doing scuba diving and skydiving. So, as is shown to us, we should go abroad and see the world when we are young, there are great chances for us to experience those amazing things which we can't do when we get old.[br]

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