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#口语喵第 34 期 Day 3# If I were to give suggestions to my friend who is always late, I would tell him or her to figure out the best route. Say, a great route would save people a lot of time. I remember once I decided to ride to a place and in order to save energy, I chose the shortest way. However, soon I sadly found out that this route contained too many crossings and I had to wait for the light turning green, which cost me much more time than I had expected. Certainly, I was late that time. So I believe it's very important to choose the best route because it can save lot's of time and avoid some surprising problems.
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2017-09-27 16:27:02 来自 口语喵
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例子感觉好复杂- -我看了两边233333333.
观点:找最简单的路~~~啊啊啊我看错题了,看成朋友老忘记东西~~~上周刚刚考的emmmm
起因:找最近的路
经过:红绿灯,耽误了
结果:惨痛教训,还是要找近路~
语法:没什么问题,最后一个surprising换成emergency合适点- -
逻辑:感觉例子如果刚刚开始说没注意要找近路所以耽搁了,更能凸显最后找近路的重要性~
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2017-09-27 17:08
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