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口语喵第 35 期 Day 1
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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 1# well,people who have the same enemy became friends, but Everyone has his own personality,you can not tell that friends will never disappointed you. right? for example, about four years ago when i was an undergraduate student in Guangzhou medical university, me and my friend Sophia went to library about 7:00 pm after dinner ,and fight for the national entrance examination of postgraduate.but a month before the examination ,Sophia fell in love with a boy called Tom, and What surprised me was that she gave up all her efforts without telling me face to face .i was so angry .but after she told me on phone ,i calm down and felt happy for her.i think she didn't mean to disappoint me and as for friends i should respect her choices even though it will make me unhappy.
2017-09-25 10:21:08 来自 口语喵
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2017-09-25 19:08
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1.逻辑方面
 基本没有大问题,举例加总结
2.语言方面
  a.undergraduate本身有“大学生”的含义,可以考虑不加后面的student
  b.me and my friend......,此处应改为 my friend and I(主格)......。
  c.应该打得急,有些小错误,首字母大写
  d.went——fought,句子前后保持时态一致
  g.说得时间有点长,可以压到50s以内
3.语音方面
   说得很流畅,但语调不够突显,总体不错
2017-09-25 22:36
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