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#口语喵第 35 期 Day 1# # I think it’s important to be calm first,to recognize our true feelings and understand what’s causing them, and have a sincere talk with your friend . It could enables us to better control our emotional responses, changing or correcting them when necessary
One day I got in to a quarrel with my best friend, Nora, since we couldn’t agree on what movie to watch in the cinema. I was sooo upset , but then I started to find the root for my frustration. You guess what ? Suddenly I came to realize that I wasn’t upset about her, actually I was anxious about the upcoming summer job as a campus counselor. So I apologized to her and explain why I was so bad-tempered today. Finally we relaxed and had fun together, the same as always.
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2017-09-25 09:34:11 来自 口语喵
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I think it’s important to be calm AT first. WE HAVE to recognize our true feelings and understand what’s causing them, and have a sincere talk with each other . It could enables(动词原形) us to better control our emotional responses, changing or correcting them when necessary. One day I got in to a quarrel with my best friend, Nora, since we couldn’t agree on what movie to watch in the cinema. I was sooo upset , but then I started to find the root for my frustration. Guess what ?(guess what 是固定无主祈使句 你写的那个是撒哈拉以南非洲版本的 guess what) I came to realize that I wasn’t upset about her, actually I was anxious about the upcoming summer job as a campus counselor. So I apologized to her and explainED why I was so bad-tempered THAT DAY. Finally we relaxed and had fun together,the same as always.
2017-09-25 15:18
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评论 1 楼: 666 土著人民受教了
2017-09-25 16:14
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2017-09-25 16:26
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评论 1楼 # I think it’s important to be calm at first. we have to recognize our true feelings and understand what’s causing them, and have a sincere talk with each other  . It could enable us to better control our emotional responses, changing or correcting them when necessary


One day I got in to a quarrel with my best friend, Nora, since we couldn’t agree on what movie to watch in the cinema. I was sooo upset , but then I started to find the root for my frustration. Guess what ? Suddenly I came to realize that I wasn’t upset about her, actually I was anxious about the upcoming summer job as a campus counselor. So I apologized to her and explained why I was so bad-tempered that day.Finally we opened our heart, relaxed and had fun together, the same as always.

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2017-09-25 16:52
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1 逻辑方面:事件:跟朋友看电影发生争执,之后道歉解决,在这里看到我的名字真是2333
起因经过: 不能确定看哪部电影,发生争执后来发现自己沮丧的根源
结果: 道歉和好
你用上次素材是可以的,但你好歹也稍微改得切合题意一点嘛,朋友disappointed you的那点体现得不够明确
2 语言方面:大魔王都改过了我就可以偷懒了hhhh
3 语音方面:单词发音问题:真的录音质量可以好一点吗?没有字幕完全听不清你在说啥 be calm sincere.....发音不清楚啊
语音语调:我觉得还可以更有感情一点
2017-09-25 18:32
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以后 别嫌麻烦 用电脑+话筒录音吧 别用微信了 行不
2017-09-25 18:41
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2017-09-25 19:03
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