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#托福写作方法课第四节# 题目:是否应该培养孩子做家务的习惯
观点:同意
漏洞:做家务可能会占用过多的时间,导致孩子学习成绩下滑或者没有时间玩耍。
堵漏:小孩子的安排时间的能力还不够强,家长可以帮助孩子合理安排时间,让孩子在充分地学习和玩耍之余来做家务。
Admittedly, I am not denying the disadvantage of doing housework. For instance, it may take too much time to do housework that there is no time for study and playing with their friends. Housework should not be a burden our children. Certainly children's ability to range their schedule need practice. Parents can help them dividing their free time properly and should guide them to realize the importance of balancing between studying and doing housework, there will be nothing to worry about.
From what has been discussed above, I can draw a conclusion that it is better to do some housework than just study all the time. It is not only because doing housework can improve relationship between parents and children, but also it can help them living better when they leave home alone such as go to university or other cities for working.
2017-09-19 18:45:20 来自 托福 3.0 方法课作业
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