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#托福作文咩第 12 期 Day 9# Nowdays, universities in my coutry seem to enter an "arms race". For instance, a university even sold its old and small campus in the downtown and built a larger and more beatiful one in the suburbs. This phenomenon triggers a heated debate on which one should be given top priority when it comes to investment: facilities or famous professors. From my perspective, famous professor should be the No.1 concern for school authorities. My viewpoint is based on the following reasons and examples.

Firstly, famous professors in a university are magnetic to excellent students. It is because what turly draws to high-quality students is someone who can show them the right way to explore the unknown world, rather than hardware conditions. A good case in point is that in the second world war, in order to escape from the Japanese invasion, several top universities in China combined together and relocated to the southwest China. At the time, without advanced facilities, the new university still worked well in fostering plenty of great talents thanks to the efforts of famous professors, which created a miracle in the history of Chinese education.

Secondly, famous professors can add much value to the university with their ramarkable contributions. The function of universities is not only producing talents for society but also serving as an impetus to the progress of human beings. It is those scientific and social breakthroughs made by famous professors that dramatically expand people's lives, increase productivity, and improve people's living standards, which really defines the importance of university. To some extent, the ranking of a university is measured by the number of published papers by professors in a journal like Nature or Science, as well as how many important awards that professors won for the school as Nobel Prize.

Admittedly, facilities are also of great importance to a university. It is hard to imagine what will become of a university if there is a poor condition in libraries, laboratories, sports venues and restaurants, because they play a basic role in supporting a university to run well. However, compared with famous professors, facilities are what work as an aid to help professors to carry out their works including teaching and researching. Thus, they are just secondary factors.

To put it in a nutshell, famous professors far overweigh the facilities and thus the former should be given more consideration in school's budget plan. Mei Yi Qi, one of the presidents of Qinghhua University, once said, "The essence of university does not lie in its buildings but in its masters." Hopefully every university can bear this remark in minds and do not put cart before the horse.
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This phenomenon arouse the public attention because, undoubtedly, such competition is money-consuming, which means there is less financial support for universities to hire famous professors. It is under heated discussion that which is more important for universities, improving school facilities or employing well-known professors? From my standpoint, hiring famous professors deserves more attention, considering the influence on cultivating excellent students and enhancing scientific abilities. 【结尾】In conclusion, hiring famous professors is of more significance. 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A seem to step into B。 Most of Chinese universities seem to step into arms race. 3. A seem to be involved in B. Most of Chinese universities seem to be involved arms race. 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。 背景段: As the popularity of advanced education, more and more Chinese universities seem to step into arms race for attracting students. Some of them choose to spend money on improving their facilities, such as new campus, libraries, gyms and so on. But others pay more attention to hiring famous professors. This phenomenon caused a heated discussion around the whole country, especially during the National College Entrance Examination. So, which one is more vital? Facilities or professors? As far as I’m concerned, it is an essence for universities to cultivate students, conduct scientific researches and develop themselves, and well-known tutors have profound impact on schools. 总阶段: In a word, famous teachers not only have long-term effect on students’ cultivation but also scientific researches conduction that are most pivotal factors to evaluate universities. Therefore, the effect of excellent mentors is more than its equipment. It means universities should concentrate more on hiring famed professors while allocating of funds. 作业四:Recently, a bunch of universities seem to enter into an arms race about improving and adding their own infrastructure, including expanding campus, building more libraries and accomodations. A bunch of universities spend tons of money on improving facilities. Even though it is important for universities to improve its amenities, however, for sake of the future of universities and students' future development, famous professor is more important. All in all, famous mentor is extremely significant for universities. In order to cultivate excellent students and make a better prospect for universities, at all costs should universities provide fiancial support for well-known mentor.
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