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#托福作文咩第 12 期 Day 4# 【作业三】
1. In today's society, we generally treat pets as family.
2. In modern society, pets are commonly considered as family.
3. In contemporary society, pets are usually regarded as family.
【作业四】
【背景段】In contemporary society, pets are usually regarded as family. More and more people spare most of their time to animals. This phenomenon triggers a heated debate on if it is fine to sustain a close relationship with pets. The way I see it, it's wonderful to have cute pets closely. My viewpoint is based on the following reasons.

【总结段】From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that it is helpful to stay with pets intimately. Keeping a regular life pace on account of walking and feeding on time every day and relaxing ourselves owing to happy game with them are both the advantages while we have a great time with little pets.
2016-07-14 09:34:53 来自 托福作文咩
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【背景段】 In contemporary society, pets are usually regarded as members of our family. More and more people are inclined to spare most of their time to accompany animals, strengthening the bond between them. This phenomenon triggers a heated debate on whether it is appropriate to sustain a close relationship with pets. The way I see it, keeping pets plays an indispensable role in our life. My viewpoint is based on the following reasons.   【总结段】From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that it is helpful to stay with pets intimately. Keeping a regular life pace on account of walking and feeding on time every day and relaxing ourselves owing to happy game with them are both the advantages while we have a great time with little pets. 最近思维匮乏,不怎么会改了,一边积累一边进步;我觉得你可以尝试把句子写长一点,多点定语之类的来修饰,还有就是尽量少使用一些比较广泛的词,能用长一点的高级一点的词汇,我的拙见,不要记恨我哈😛
2016-07-14 10:29
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评论 1楼 是的是的 我现在词汇有点少,还要再背!向你学习
2016-07-14 10:31
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【作文题目】 Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals like members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 【观点】 我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事。 【理由一】 养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。 【理由二】 养宠物有利于保持有规律的生活节奏。 【背景段】 当今社会,我们常常把宠物看成家庭中的成员。他们生病时我们会照料他们,他们身体好时我们会陪他们玩耍。我认为人们和宠物之间建立的亲密关系是非常健康有益的。 【总结段】 总而言之,我认为和宠物建立亲密的关系是健康有益的。和宠物互动,人们的身心都会得到放松,照顾宠物也有利于保持有规律的生活节奏。跟宠物亲近,像对待家人一样对待宠物是一件很自然很有益的事。 【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和背景段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。 第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。--relationships good? 第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。 有些人对自己的宠物十分上心,会全心全意地照顾它 Somebody will take a very good care of their pet. They will try everything to make sure their pets life will full of fun. 第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。 这很好,这对主人的生活以及将来的人际交往有很好的影响 This is great because pets will bring a better life for their master. What’s more, it will helps their master have a good relationship between humans. 【作业二】 请结合上述观点、理由和总结段,仿写一个新的总结段。 总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。  我觉得我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事。 第一,有宠物的人更有人情味,会对身边的人很好 第二,有宠物的人会保持良好的的生活节奏,日常生活过得充实 第三,养宠物的人大多身体健康,性格外向 I think it is a good thing that people have close relationship to their pets. I have 3 reasons for it. First of all, people who have a pet will be more sensual. This kind of people will threat their friends very kind. Secondly, people have pet will keep a great life style which makes their daily life very substantiate. Besides,if you have a pet, your body must be healthy and you must be a outgoing person. 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:当今社会,我们常常把宠物看成家庭中的成员。 1. In today’s society, we generally treat our pet as a member of our family. 2. In modern society, pet is commonly considered as a member of our family. 3. In contemporary society, pets are usually regarded as our family. 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。
【作业一】 第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。 第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。 第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。 当今社会,我们常常把宠物看成家庭中的成员。他们生病时我们会照料他们,他们健康时我们会陪他们玩耍。我认为人们和宠物之间建立的亲密关系是非常健康有益的。 【作业二】 总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。 总而言之,我认为和宠物建立亲密的关系是健康有益的。和宠物互动,人们的身心都会得到放松,照顾宠物,有利于保持有规律的生活节奏。跟宠物亲近,像对待家人一样对待宠物是一件很自然很有益的事。 【作业三】 1. In today’s society, we generally treat animal as a member of the family. 2. In modern society, animal is commonly considered as a member of the family. 3. In contemporary society, animal is usually regarded as a member of the family. 【作业四】 【背景段】 In contemporary society, animal is usually regarded as a member of the family.We take care of it when it sick and accompany with it when it healthy.I think build a close relationship between human being and animal is healthy and beneficial. 【总结段】 Overall,i think create a close relationship between pet and human being is healthy and beneficial.People feel both physical and mental relax when they interaction with there animal and people can keep a regular living rhythm when they take care of the animal.Stay close to animal and treat it like a member of the family is a nature and benefit thing.