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#托福作文咩第 12 期 Day 1# 【作业三】
1. I think human has a close relationship with pets is great, largely due to keeping a pet is beneficial to people's health.
2. I believe getting a close pet company is a good choice, mainly because of the little animals are helpful for master's health.
3. It is advisable to have a close connection with pets, principally because they are greatly beneficial for master's health.
【作业四】
I think human has a close relationship with pets is great, largely due to keeping a pet is beneficial to people's health. As the increasing advanced science and technique developed, more and more people are suffering from the high pressure, leading to both mental and physical problems. It cannot be deny that when we stay with a cute animal, we will laugh more and have to play games with them, which forces us to stand up and go outside. I have witnessed my friend, Sara, recovered her depression under the help of her dog. In contrast of the negative attitude before she has a pet, she takes a walk with her dog every day, retaining her smile finally.
2016-07-11 10:17:14 来自 托福作文咩
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造句:身心健康没翻译😊 I think human has a close relationship with pets is great, largely due to keeping a pet is beneficial to people's health. As the increasing advanced science and technique developed, more and more people are suffering from the high pressure, leading to both mental and physical problems. It cannot be deny【denied】 that when we stay with a cute animal, we will laugh more and have to play games with them, which forces us to stand up and go outside.【这句我感觉应该It cannot be denied that when we stay and play with a cute animal, we will have more laughter in our daily life as well as gain more opportunities to exercise since the motivation to play with it.】 I have witnessed my friend, Sara, recovered 【from】her depression under the help【不应该是狗的帮助,应该是company】 of her dog. In contrast of【to】 the negative attitude before she has a pet, now she takes a walk with her dog every day, retaining her smile finally【这句我觉得说一下a ready smile on her face:retain smile感觉怪怪的】.不喜勿喷,好久没写了,相互探讨哈
2016-07-11 11:23
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谢谢,你改的句子真挺好!!
2016-07-11 20:38
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【作文题目】 Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals like members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 现象证明题>>具象拆分>>举例子 【作业一】 【例子】我的朋友一个人在一线城市打拼,自从家里有了一只小猫之后,即使男朋友加班不能陪她在一起,猫猫的陪伴让她的生活变的更加快乐,不再孤单。 【作业二】 我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事,主要是因为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。我们都知道,大都市中生活的人都十分孤独,我的朋友一个人在一线城市打拼,自从两个月前家里有了一只小猫之后,即使男朋友加班不能陪她在一起,猫猫的陪伴让她的生活变的更加快乐,不再孤单。这可能是因为与宠物的交互活动,能让主人得到放松,同时又能给主人增添一些有规律的活动,比如定时铲屎、和宠物嬉戏等等。因此我认为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康,人们跟宠物关系亲密是件好事。 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事,主要是因为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。 1. A is great, largely due to B I think a close relationship between human and animal is great,largely due to feed an animal is conducive to mental and physical healthy of the owner. 2. I think a close relationship between human and pet is a good choice, mainly because of feed an animal is conducive to mental and physical healthy of the owner. 3. It is advisable to keep a relationship with an animal, principally because feed an animal is conducive to mental and physical healthy of the owner. 【作业四】 请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。 It is advisable to keep a relationship with an animal, principally because feed an animal is conducive to mental and physical healthy of the owner.As we know,various people who live in metropolis are very lonely.A friend of mine is struggling in a first-tier class,since two months ago she raise a cat,the life changes.Although her boyfriend need to work overtime and can’t accompany with her,the companion of the cat makes her life more happy and less loneliness than before.It is mainly because the contact between owner and their pets can relax the owner and add some regular activities like playing and cleaning.And overall,I think a close relationship between human and pet is a good choice, mainly because of feed an animal is conducive to mental and physical healthy of the owner.
【作业一】美国宾州大学研究证实,宠物能消除压力、稳定情绪、松弛生理紧张、预防疾病。小狗可帮助生理上的深度休息。哈佛大学医学院的哈博特·本生博士把这称为“放松反应”。研究表明,每天进行两次放松反应,每次只需10-20分钟,就可以祛除压力或焦虑对健康的损害,增进心脏健康,改善免疫系统。 【作业二】我认为人们养宠物是件好事,主要是因为宠物有助于主人的身心健康。我们都知道,在当代社会,工作压力和生活压力逐步增大,而美国宾州大学研究证实,宠物能消除压力、稳定情绪、松弛生理紧张、预防疾病。哈佛大学医学院的哈博特·本生博士把这称为“放松反应”。研究表明,每天进行两次放松反应,每次只需10-20分钟,就可以祛除压力或焦虑对健康的损害,对身体有好处。这可能是因为与宠物的交互活动,能让主人得到快乐并且进行有规律的锻炼。因此我认为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康,人们跟宠物关系亲密是件好事。 【作业三】 1.Keeping pets in a close relationship is great, largely due to the physical and mental health that can be improved by having pets. 2.Keeping pets in a close relationship is a good choice, mainly because of the physical and mental health that can be improved by having pets. 3.It is advisable to keep pets, principally because it can benefit master's physical and mental health. 【作业四】As far as i am concerned,it is advisable to keep pets, principally because it can benefit master's physical and mental health.As we all know,the pressure of lives and works is getting much heavier,and researches from University of Pennsylvania show that pets can decrease the pressure,calm the master down,relax biological nervous and prevent the illness.The professor,Herbert Benson who is from Harvard University named it as The Relaxation Response. Recent studies have shown that experiencing the relaxation response for 10 to 20 minutes twice a day can wipe out the harm which is produced by pressure and improve our body health.It is because that activities with pets provide their masters regular exercises and happiness.So I think having pets is good for our health and keeping pets in a close relationship is a good choice.
【作业一】 有大量报道显示养宠物对人类健康的好处,请举一个相关的例子。 有调查发现, 饲养宠物的人通长寿命会比不养宠物的人长十岁左右。 【作业二】 请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事。 随着城市化的进度加快, 城里人的生活空间越来越狭窄。科技的与时并进领到人际关愈渐疏远, 这种时候就需要有宠物的陪伴。有了宠物的陪伴会令到主人有了多一个亲密无间的伴侣和会感到被需要, 由身心的角度出发, 饲养宠物会让养宠物的人有了寄托。 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事,主要是因为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。 1. A is great, largely due to B 2. A is a good choice, mainly because of B. 3. It is advisable to do A, principally because B. 1.. Keeping close relationship with pets is great, largely due to that raising pets reder pet-keepers healthy for their bodies. 2. Being close with pets is a good choice, mainly because having pets is conductive to pet-owner's physical and mental health. 3. It is advisable to have pets, principally becasue keeping promote development of body and wind. \ 【作业四】 请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。 With urbanization increasing, the living space leave to people in the city becomes less and less, and as science and technology booming, the interpersonal relationship increasingly alienated from each other. And this is the reason why some people keep pets company- having pets accompany you will give you more close companions. From phycological aspects, keeping pets enables pet-keepers'minds to have mind resposing.
【作业一】 有大量报道显示养宠物对人类健康的好处,请举一个相关的例子。 纽约州立大学进行了一项有关高血压的研究。以宠物为伴的病人的血压水平比另外一组只靠服药治疗的对照测试组的病人的血压水平要低。心率测试也表现出显著的不同,宠物主人的心跳平均数为每分钟81次,而另一组的心跳平均数为每分钟91次。 【作业二】 请结合观点、理由,以及你写的例子,仿照上述理由段重写一个理由段,说明为什么人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事。 我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事,主要是因为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。随着现代物质生活水平的不断提高,人们在饮食上得到了极大的改善,食物种类繁多,却越来越不爱运动,高血压患者在这样的条件下越来越多。纽约州立大学研究得以宠物为伴的病人的血压水平比另外一组只靠服药治疗的对照测试组的病人的血压水平要低。心率测试也表现出显著的不同,宠物主人的心跳平均数为每分钟81次,而另一组的心跳平均数为每分钟91次。可见宠物可以缓解高血压患者的不良情绪,还能在与患者的玩耍中使患者运动起来,进一步降低高血压爆发的风险。所以我认为,与宠物关系亲密是件好事。 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:我认为人们和宠物关系亲密是件好事,主要是因为养宠物有助于主人的身心健康。 1. A is great, largely due to B 2. A is a good choice, mainly because of B. 3. It is advisable to do A, principally because B. 1. Having a close relationship with pets is great, largely due to the beneficial effect on its owner's health. 2. Having a close relationship with pets is a good choice, mainly because of the beneficial effect on its owner's health. 3. It is advisable to have a close relationship with pets, principally because keeping pets is benefit to its owner's health. 【作业四】 请将你在作业二中写的理由段翻译成英文。 From my point of view, having a close relationship with pets is great, largely due to the beneficial effect on its owner's health. Along with the rising of the living standards, a huge improvement has been showed in our food and drink, on the contrary, a decline number of people do enough sports everyday, which cause more and more people suffer from high blood pressure under this condition. Researchers from State University of New York show that the blood pressure level of patients who companied with a pet is much lower then the blood pressure level of people who only took pills. In addition, the heart rate test also shows a remarkable different. Pets owner's heart rate only 81 times per second, while the heart rate of the pill group is 91 times per second. forasmuch, we can easily get a conclusion that pets can decrease the negative emotion to make its master more healthy. Moreover, playing with pets also provide their owner some exercise, which further decrease the risk of suffer from high blood pressure. Therefore, I suppose it is advisable to have a close relationship with pets.