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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 9# 【作业2】
With the remarkable progress of people’s living standard, getting a good quality of education seems to be a very important thing, as education accounts for the knowledge acquired now but also influence the ability performed in the future. When it comes to the way to educate children, there are usually two approaches: to study by going field trips or to study in classroom. As for me, I prefer to learn knowledge in a more practical way such as field trips rather than learning in classroom. And there are some reasons and examples to illustrate my point of view.

First and foremost, studying by field trips is a good way of cultivating interest. Take myself as an example. When I was in middle school, I took a field trip in a biology class to take a close look at the plants; the plants are varied in different shapes , functions and sizes, which are very interesting to discover. This trip, however, made myself interested in plants and even shaped my career life. Currently I worked as a nutritionist assistant, for I found my interest in biology in the field trip ten years ago.

Besides, field trip does better in stripping up one's inquisitiveness about knowledge. It would be a very good chance for people to corporate theory with way practice. In other words, learning knowledge by taking field trip enables students to learn knowledge in different aspects and learn it deeply; field trip is a good way to portray interior factors to allow people to get to know things better or even become interested in things. Last time when I was in sophomore, my art history professor required us to finish a research paper about comprehending Renaissance art style and technology. In order to gave us a better way to understand the masterpieces, he firstly worked us through all the basic drawing theories, then he took us to the national museum to see the exhibition of Renaissance art. During the exhibition, we had a precious chance to take a very look at the masterpieces by many famous artists, which was very helpful for us to understand the drawing style, material and technology. This case demonstrates that many things could be felt and understood only by experience and practice, therefore field trip is definitely a good choice to cultivate interest and learn things deeply.

Admittedly, field trip can be transformed into an obstacle if students go out for study too often. To be precise, it is easier for students to be distracted by other factors happened around than to concentrate on the knowledge discovering, which may finally decrease the study efficiency. In other words, field trip, though, as a way of learning things deeply and comprehensively, could also influence students' learning process in an inefficient way. However, learning in the classroom would not have such a problem of distraction. Therefore it would be an optimal solution to corporate field trip with basic in-class session to acquire knowledge.

To put it in a nutshell, clearly justified through above-mentioned reasons and examples, students are worth taking field trips to acquire knowledge than learning only through lessons in classroom, for the field trips enable students to have a better understanding of knowledge and also cultivate interest to shape their future lives.
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With the remarkable progress of people’s living standard, getting a good quality[感觉这个quality换成standard会不会好一点] of education seems to be a very important thing, as education accounts for the knowledge acquired now but also influence the ability performed in the future. When it comes to the way to educate children, there are usually two approaches: to study by going field trips or to study in classroom. As for me, I prefer to learn knowledge in a more practical way such as field trips[前面指定了两个选择,这里说such as感觉不那么好呢] rather than learning in classroom. And there are some reasons and examples to illustrate my point of view. First and foremost, studying by field trips is a good way of cultivating interest. Take myself as an example. When I was in middle school, I took a field trip in a biology class to take a close look at the plants; the plants are[时态???] varied in different shapes , functions and sizes, which are[时态???] very interesting to discover. This trip, however, made myself interested in plants and even shaped my career life. Currently I worked[这应该用现在时吧] as a nutritionist assistant, for I found my interest in biology in the field trip ten years ago. Besides, field trip does better in stripping up one's inquisitiveness about knowledge. It would be a very good chance for people to corporate theory with way practice. In other words, learning knowledge by taking field trip enables students to learn knowledge in different aspects and learn it deeply; field trip is a good way to portray interior factors to allow people to get to know things better or even become interested in things. Last time when I was in sophomore, my art history professor required us to finish a research paper about comprehending Renaissance art style and technology. In order to gave us a better way to understand the masterpieces, he firstly worked us through all the basic drawing theories, then he took us to the national museum to see the exhibition of Renaissance art. During the exhibition, we had a precious chance to take a very look at the masterpieces by many famous artists, which was very helpful for us to understand the drawing style, material and technology. This case demonstrates that many things could be felt and understood only by experience and practice, therefore field trip is definitely a good choice to cultivate interest and learn things deeply. Admittedly, field trip can be transformed into an obstacle if students go out for study too often. To be precise, it is easier for students to be distracted by other factors happened around than to concentrate on the knowledge discovering, which may finally decrease the study efficiency. In other words, field trip, though, as a way of learning things deeply and comprehensively, could also influence students' learning process in an inefficient way. However, learning in the classroom would not have such a problem of distraction. Therefore it would be an optimal solution to corporate field trip with basic in-class session to acquire knowledge.[没啥问题啦]
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With the global education booming, education has been an indispensable part in people’s comprehensive development and a lot of parents are willing to offer plenty of money to their children’s study. Some parents insist that children should spend most of their time studying in classroom, which is a necessity to their promising future. However, as for me, going on field trips is more beneficial to students’ education than staying in the classroom at school is. Here are two cases in point that can best illustrate my point of view.  First of all, the field study contributions to better understanding of what students have learned. Learning in the classroom, students can only through the books and courseware aceess the knowledge, and in the field of learning process, students can get rid of the limitation of the classroom, what they have learned through many aspects, such as looking,sounding, smelling, feeling , not just staying on the books, thus deepens to the understanding of knowledges. For example a biology class, the teacher should take the students to understand all kinds of plants, if this lesson is in the botanical garden or outdoor, students not only can see various plants in the nature, but also can smell the different smells, to compare the different living environment. The field study is more vivid and interesting than in the classroom with books or computer course. So, compared with learning in the classroom, field study is better for the child's education. Next, field trips is more likely to arouse students curiosity of study . As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. If field study can stimulate students' interest, which indicates this way is better than in the classroom learning. I remember when I was in elementary school , one day, it has just rained, and the teacher took us out of the classroom, to felt the fresh air and pleasant scenery after a rain. At this point, everything in nature is so interesting to me, and everything worth mining. After that, the science class became my favorite course. Although the past many years, now I still remember the scene of the lesson. In contrast, for those who are in the classroom on the science of memory that has already gone. This example shows we went to the field in science classes, students feel like adventure, and believe that many people have a similar experience. For this reason, compared with learning in the classroom, field study[ing] is better for the child's education. Admittedly, some people thought staying in the classroom is better than going on field trips for children education. For the safety accidents will happen easily on a field trip, in contrast , students learning in classroom is more safe. As a matter of fact, that staying in the classroom is definitely safe hasn't got the evidence of data. The safety of studying is determined by teacher's organization and management, if it is not in that case, studying in classroom though that there is no guarantee that absolutely safe. Going on field trips that has advantages dramatically superior to the study in classroom, which is better to children education.  In a nutshell, field trips not only contributes to helping student to understand the knowledge better, but also arouse students' interests of study, which plays a vital role in achieving the goal of education. Thus I think going to field trips is more beneficial to student' education.
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