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Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To begin with, field trip is conducive to help student get better comprehension of what they learned.When studying in classroom, students can only base on the textbook to understand and remember the theory.There is little possibility to use them in practice to solve problems.On the contrary, field trip provide students opportunity to apply theory to solve problems.Commonly, we all know that it is the only standard to test whether you mater the knowledge or not that you can use the theory to get problems done.Therefore, field trip is of great impotence for students.To ground on my own experience, I have taken a class called ERP recently,it inspired me a lot.After finishing it, I got a feeling deeply that the real business world is just the battlefield and I found that to run an entity is really hard.That means not everyone can be a distinguished CEO. Again,it proves how important the field trip is for students.To recap, I do believe that field trip contributes to help student to understand the knowledge better.

Plus,field trip is better at stimulating student’s delight in knowledge. Commonly,we can only insist on one thing and be expert at it as long as we are driven by interest. Field trip haves advantage over learning in classroom that student can participate personally in that process which can arouse student’s curiosity of study.Based on that, field trip is way too better than study in classroom. To recall this last internship I made, I got assess to the actual auditing procedure the first time. After finishing it, I have to say I love auditing and I made myself a commitment to be an outstanding auditor. Because of this experience, it is easier to learn advanced audit theory for me.Compared to the time without the internship, learning theory won't be that boring any more and it is more efficient. Field trip can make us improve dramatically, which is beyond the limitation of just learning in classroom.Up to this point, I do stand for that field trip is better to students' study than learning in classroom

Someone think that learning in the classroom is better than field trip.They said that field trip in really inconvenient. Like, we can hardly get the appropriate field spot as well as sufficient resources for students. However, all that staff can be solved by school and government.It just takes some time.But, we have to emphasis that field trip have much more advantage over leaning in the classroom.That is irreplaceable.Therefore, I do believe field trip is better than learning in the classroom.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-13 09:21:50 来自 托福作文咩
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1.最后一段第二行 these 打错啦。 2.每句话句号结束后,打一个空格,不然一放到word里看全是红色波浪线...... 3.因为我们分段完成的作文,总字数超了。(我也是)在改精简点就好了。
2016-05-13 09:37
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评论 1 楼: 好好好!我再修改修改谢谢么么~
2016-05-13 09:40
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Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is[这里可以用一些短语啊my point is感觉表述不太大气] field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To begin with, field trip is conducive to help[ing/to是介词] student[s] get better comprehension of what they learned. When studying in classroom, students can only base on the textbook to understand and remember the theory. There is little possibility to use them in practice to solve problems. On the contrary, field trip provide[s] students opportunity to apply theory to solve problems. Commonly, we all know that it is the only standard to test whether you mater[master] the knowledge or not that you can use the theory to get problems done. Therefore, field trip is of great impotence[importance] for students. To ground on my own experience, I have taken a class called ERP recently, it inspired me a lot. After finishing it, I got a feeling deeply that the real business world is just the battlefield and I found that to run an entity is really hard. That means not everyone can be a distinguished CEO. Again, it proves how important the field trip is for students. To recap, I do believe that field trip contributes to help[ing] student to understand the knowledge better. Plus, field trip is better at stimulating student’s delight in knowledge. Commonly, we can only insist on one thing and be expert at it as long as we are driven by interest. Field trip haves advantage over learning in classroom that student can participate personally in that process which can arouse student’s curiosity of study. Based on that, field trip is way too better than study in classroom. To recall this last internship I made, I got assess to the actual auditing procedure the first time. After finishing it, [和上一段表达一样可以换其他形式]I have to say I love auditing and I made[这一句前后时态不一致] myself a commitment to be an outstanding auditor. Because of this experience, it is easier to learn advanced audit theory for me. Compared to the time without the internship, learning theory won't be that boring any more and it is more efficient. Field trip can make us improve [宾语呢] dramatically, which is beyond the limitation of just learning in classroom. Up to this point, I do stand for that field trip is better to students' study than learning in classroom Someone think that learning in the classroom is better than field trip. They said that field trip [宾从没谓语] in really inconvenient. Like, we can hardly get the appropriate field spot as well as sufficient resources for students. However, all that staff can be solved by school and government. It just takes some time. But, we have to emphasis that field trip have much more advantage[s] over leaning in the classroom. That is irreplaceable. Therefore, I do believe field trip is better than learning in the classroom. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they [have] learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom. 字数确实好多600+再精简一点
2016-05-13 20:15
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评论 3楼 好谢谢惠普!么么哒❤️
2016-05-13 20:25
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The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is booming and more finances can be poured into education, especially in the places where students can acquire knowledge and master skills. Along with this phenomenon comes a heated discussion: is going on field trips better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school? As for me, I have no doubt in proclaiming the importance of the former and I would explore the rationalities behind this idea in this following paragraphs. To begin with, during the process of going on field trips, there must be curiousness and surprise that emerge one after another, which really can help to deepen our understanding of subjects. It is because children would definitely refer data or seek help from teachers to solve their puzzles that are hard to find answers from textbooks. A good case in point is when I was studying the college subject, Chemical Reaction Engineering, its principles and formulas were so confusing that I could hardly be preoccupied with it. But the field trip after two-mouth study of theories offered me a chance to observe the experimental apparatuses whose complexity and precision incited my interests and it is not until that time that I was willing to specialize in it. In addition, conducting field trips are conducive to fostering students’ abilities of operation and adapting to social development. There is no denying that modern enterprises put an emphasis on employees’ practical skills and ability to communicate that can hardly be mastered in the classroom. Conversely, in field trips not only can we acquire journeymen’s wealth of work experience, but also we can master the essential social living principle. Recently I have read an appalling fact that the state-owned and private firms are more willing to employ those of rich social experience than the excellent students in academics. Is it a compelling case that explains why internship is so important to us? Admittedly, I’m not denying that the classroom learning should be never overlooked, for it lays a foundation for our following research and work. However, studying basic lessons in class, the basic requirement for comprehensive development of students, is far from enough for them to take a place in the highly competitive society. Moreover, only going on field trips can students have a deep understanding of curriculum and develop essential capabilities which is of great importance to their future. To put it into nutshell, I can safely draw a conclusion that children can learn much from going on field trips than staying in the classroom at school. Just as an idiom that goes, no practice, no gain in one’s wit. The most effective way for people to master knowledge is to go on field trips to put what we have learned into practice.
With the social developing, people pay more attention on the education. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant. What is the best way for education between going to the felid trips and studying in the classroom? In my opinion, going to the felid trips is the best way for education. There are the following two aspects. To begin with, going on the filed trips is conductive to students better understand of knowledge. When students study at the classroom, they only can use textbooks and courseware. On the contrary, during the process of going on filed trips, students break away from the limitation of the classroom,observe the things closely and learn vividly through the different aspects in terms of the appearance, sound, taste and feel. We do not only stand on the book so that we are able to learn it deeper. A history class serves as a good example. The teacher would like to introduce some events and characters. If students visit the historical museum, they are able to touch the imitational ancient artifacts and skim through the relative books and records that bring the different feeling to the visitors. Students would don’t think about the knowledge and just take over what the teacher taught. Next, going on field trips is more likely to arouse students’ curiosity of study. It is often said that the interest is the best teacher. Field study would stimulate students to be interested on study. I can still remember the composition class. We went to the nearby park and saw the blooming flowers. We just have personal experience, then, we are able to write down vivid composition. I believe that many people have the similar experience. They are so excited going on the field trips. As a result, going on field trips is better than staying in the classroom. Someone considers that studying in the classroom has more advantages than going on the field trips. Because teachers would impart more knowledge, it could be more effective. In fact, students determined the efficiency. Inculcating more knowledge doesn’t mean that students grasp all knowledge what has been taught. On the contrary, students are able to grasp more knowledge when they have personal experiences. So going on the field trips are better than the studying in the classroom. In conclusion, going to the filed trips would better benefit to student to better understand. It is able to stimulate interest of learning and improve the efficiency. Children would find the new knowledge from the daily life. Therefore, going on the filed trips is the best way for education.
The process of modernization gives birth to educational methods diversified such as traditional class, field lesson, online course, and so forth. Accordingly, when it comes to education, there has always been plentiful of discussions about it. For example, which is more beneficial for students between classroom learning and field-based studying? Personally speaking, learning outside is do better because students can gain knowledge more vividly and initiatively. Following reasons elaborated upon my upper point. To begin with, field lesson is of great help to students to understand what they have learned on books. In terms of students, studying from teaching material, not only are they bald and abstract, but also not easily be acceptable. While combining the theory with practice, it is conducive to students to understand and utilize through observation, sound, taste and touch. To some extents, the significance of studying in the real scene cannot be exaggerated. For example, a physics course, a teacher inform students of light component and refraction. If this class was a field lesson, students can water in air and then observe the different color of a rainbow outside. Under this situation, students can understand the conception and principle theory of light. By contrast, in the class, through books, the light formation cannot be imaged easily and vigorously. Consequently, field lesson contributes to students in-deep studying and understanding. Secondary, field lesson is do better in stirring up students' inquisitiveness. Commonly, the regular means of teaching in class bored students, and by contrast, field lesson shows an amusing way in front of them. Generally speaking, interest is the best teacher. Once forming a habit due to interest and hobby, students can learn spontaneously. There is an example to my mind. I still remember one biology course when the teacher took us to marine park. We had seen the animals, such as polar bears, penguins, sharks, jellyfishes, which were introduced in books. The feeling of close encounter quite differed from that of learning. All the things--the cute shapes, fascinating characteristics and peculiar sound of those animals—incredibly attracted us. After that trip, our class built up study groups to learn the marine world actively. What fantastic the field lesson is. Some people consider that it is more efficiency of studying in classroom than of field lesson, because field-based learning is likely to distract students, especially for them who are lower self-control. Besides, taking part in outside class, they would hardly gain the relevant knowledge, and also spend time on what they should spend on school in the same time. Virtually, there is no evidence showing that daily learning in school is more effective than outside. However, students’ could not focus on the knowledge in practice, they cannot concentrate in class as well. At least, outside learning gives students more direct perception about what they learned. In a nutshell, field lesson impart knowledge to students profoundly and vividly. Simultaneously, this method stimulates students’ delight in studying and cultivate their enthusiasm. Therefore, field lesson is important for students to acquire knowledge.
Along with the progress and development of our society, education keep innovating and reforming in ways and means as well. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant, one of those is the comparison between field trips and classroom studying, which one has better influence on children? From my perspective, field trips is more effective to implement, I can boil my ideas down to two reasons as given below. To begin with , field trip is of great help to students to get better comprehension of what they learnt. In classroom, students' knowledges only come from books and interpretation of teachers, conversely, during the field trips, students can observe things what they learnt closely, they will get deeper understanding about those knowledge through true feeling. For instance, in art class, we draw anything by copying from books, if teachers can bring students to parks or zoos to paint from life, students will get close to the true lives by carefully observing, then, they can have clearer picture about creatures such as animals and plants. Those experience can help students to develop their imagination on painting. If they just paint according to pictures on books, it's not easy to develop their creation. Next, field trip arouse our curiosity of learning. It's often said interest is the best teacher. In my university, at first, social psychology is my headache among all subjects, because there're many boring theories. Last September, our teacher arranged us to practice in psychological counselling rooms of some universities. During the practice, I understood that skilled communication and experienced suggestions have positive and effective impact on those students who came there for help. After talked with the consultants, some students become more positive and sunny, their problems are solved and conquered as well. All these made me feel psychology is so amazing, I became a big fan of psychology and often got high scores in psychology afterwards. So, comparing with learning by books in classroom, field trip is a useful way to stimulate our delight in studying. Someone believe that children can better concentrate on studying when they are in classroom, because they are easy to distract from studying by interesting environment during field trip. There's no denying that, however, it also indicates that field trips is more interesting to children. Compare with studying in classroom, field trips can help children to understand knowledge from books by a much more vivid way, as well as stimulate them to acquire more information about what they learnt. Hence, field trips has incomparable advantages on the effect of teaching. To sum up, field trips helps children have better comprehension on what they learnt, as well as arouse their learning interest. In terms of motivating students' enthusiasm, field trips is distinctly dominant, so I believe that field trips has better impact on children comparing with classroom studying.

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