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Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To begin with, field trip is conducive to help student get better comprehension of what they learned.When studying in classroom, students can only base on the textbook to understand and remember the theory.There is little possibility to use them in practice to solve problems.On the contrary, field trip provide students opportunity to apply theory to solve problems.Commonly, we all know that it is the only standard to test whether you mater the knowledge or not that you can use the theory to get problems done.Therefore, field trip is of great impotence for students.To ground on my own experience, I have taken a class called ERP recently,it inspired me a lot.After finishing it, I got a feeling deeply that the real business world is just the battlefield and I found that to run an entity is really hard.That means not everyone can be a distinguished CEO. Again,it proves how important the field trip is for students.To recap, I do believe that field trip contributes to help student to understand the knowledge better.

Plus,field trip is better at stimulating student’s delight in knowledge. Commonly,we can only insist on one thing and be expert at it as long as we are driven by interest. Field trip haves advantage over learning in classroom that student can participate personally in that process which can arouse student’s curiosity of study.Based on that, field trip is way too better than study in classroom. To recall this last internship I made, I got assess to the actual auditing procedure the first time. After finishing it, I have to say I love auditing and I made myself a commitment to be an outstanding auditor. Because of this experience, it is easier to learn advanced audit theory for me.Compared to the time without the internship, learning theory won't be that boring any more and it is more efficient. Field trip can make us improve dramatically, which is beyond the limitation of just learning in classroom.Up to this point, I do stand for that field trip is better to students' study than learning in classroom

Someone think that learning in the classroom is better than field trip.They said that field trip in really inconvenient. Like, we can hardly get the appropriate field spot as well as sufficient resources for students. However, all that staff can be solved by school and government.It just takes some time.But, we have to emphasis that field trip have much more advantage over leaning in the classroom.That is irreplaceable.Therefore, I do believe field trip is better than learning in the classroom.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-13 09:21:50 来自 托福作文咩
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1.最后一段第二行 these 打错啦。 2.每句话句号结束后,打一个空格,不然一放到word里看全是红色波浪线...... 3.因为我们分段完成的作文,总字数超了。(我也是)在改精简点就好了。
2016-05-13 09:37
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评论 1 楼: 好好好!我再修改修改谢谢么么~
2016-05-13 09:40
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Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is[这里可以用一些短语啊my point is感觉表述不太大气] field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To begin with, field trip is conducive to help[ing/to是介词] student[s] get better comprehension of what they learned. When studying in classroom, students can only base on the textbook to understand and remember the theory. There is little possibility to use them in practice to solve problems. On the contrary, field trip provide[s] students opportunity to apply theory to solve problems. Commonly, we all know that it is the only standard to test whether you mater[master] the knowledge or not that you can use the theory to get problems done. Therefore, field trip is of great impotence[importance] for students. To ground on my own experience, I have taken a class called ERP recently, it inspired me a lot. After finishing it, I got a feeling deeply that the real business world is just the battlefield and I found that to run an entity is really hard. That means not everyone can be a distinguished CEO. Again, it proves how important the field trip is for students. To recap, I do believe that field trip contributes to help[ing] student to understand the knowledge better. Plus, field trip is better at stimulating student’s delight in knowledge. Commonly, we can only insist on one thing and be expert at it as long as we are driven by interest. Field trip haves advantage over learning in classroom that student can participate personally in that process which can arouse student’s curiosity of study. Based on that, field trip is way too better than study in classroom. To recall this last internship I made, I got assess to the actual auditing procedure the first time. After finishing it, [和上一段表达一样可以换其他形式]I have to say I love auditing and I made[这一句前后时态不一致] myself a commitment to be an outstanding auditor. Because of this experience, it is easier to learn advanced audit theory for me. Compared to the time without the internship, learning theory won't be that boring any more and it is more efficient. Field trip can make us improve [宾语呢] dramatically, which is beyond the limitation of just learning in classroom. Up to this point, I do stand for that field trip is better to students' study than learning in classroom Someone think that learning in the classroom is better than field trip. They said that field trip [宾从没谓语] in really inconvenient. Like, we can hardly get the appropriate field spot as well as sufficient resources for students. However, all that staff can be solved by school and government. It just takes some time. But, we have to emphasis that field trip have much more advantage[s] over leaning in the classroom. That is irreplaceable. Therefore, I do believe field trip is better than learning in the classroom. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they [have] learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom. 字数确实好多600+再精简一点
2016-05-13 20:15
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评论 3楼 好谢谢惠普!么么哒❤️
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Take a composition lesson on the subject of spring breaks for example, teachers have an opportunity to lead the students to smell the roses and give the duty to record the entire sequence of events. Studying in the natural habitat, pupils are easier to generate the real feeling from nature. Not only can they observe the growth of plants and animals of filed trips, but also they may hold deep impressions of the overall processes, making them more accessible to write down the composition with the topic of spring walk by providing the authentic material. The way to finish the composition on filed trips is more vivid than in classrooms by books and imaginations, with more impressions. As a result, writing a good essay is more convenient and collected examples become more real. To sum up, going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school. Secondly, going on filed trips is better at stimulating students’ delight in knowledge. Interest is the best teacher, so goes the proverb. It is better to teach students by going on filed trips, which has an advantage of arousing students’ curiosity, than to impart knowledge in classrooms. In my memory, it was a composition class, the teacher took the classmates swim to the spring. We had a great time by the river side, with the butterflies dancing in the air and fish swimming in the water. The process of enjoying the nature made us quite interesting. It seemed that the flavor of spring was longed to be captured, every details had to be chased. I started to love writing, getting information from our life and recording everything. Many years have passed, I can still vividly recall this scene. On the contrary, the memories of the composition courses in the classroom are long gone. As we can see from the example, students can obtain more interesting experience from observation by going on filed trips to take the composition class, which contributes to the improvement of their interest in learning. I believe that many individuals have a similar experience, when told that they will go on filed trips, a cry of joy burst forth from the crowd. As a result, going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school. There is a wide perception that learning in classrooms is better, compared with going on file trips. As a result of the point that studying in classrooms is easier to attract students’ attentions, going on filed trips gives students extra time to distract their focus. In fact, no statistics indicates that taking courses in classrooms has an advantage of paying attention to the knowledge, the focus on class is often intimately linked to the age of students and the way of teaching pupils. Students are unable to focus on the class for a long time with a young age and a tedious arrangement. On the contrary, going on filed trips makes students more active, they would like to involve in the lesson. Consequently, going on filed trips is easier to arouse students’ curiosity. To put it simply, going on filed trips gains a better understanding of what students have learned, and the way it also does better in stirring up students’ inquisitiveness about knowledge and stimulating children’s learning initiative, which have an advantage of spreading knowledge, as well as contributing to the children’s education.
It is said that education is the foundation of the long-term.With the remarkable progressive of society, people pay more attention and spend more on education,which make the way of education innovation and reformed constantly. All the time, there are a great number of debates in society on the way -- staying in the classroom and going field trips which does better to students. As for me , I believe that field trips are preferable. My reasons and examples are followed. To begin with, going on field trips is conducive to students' understanding of what have learnt. If students study in the classroom, they just depend on textbooks or ppts. Nevertheless, students can get rid of the constraint of classroom to observe things they learnt in field trips. By means of olfactory, vision, auditory and touch, pupils will have a comprehensive cognition of what they learnt rather than stopping over books, which can acquire a deep understanding. For example, In a biology class, the teacher wants to teach pupils variety of plants , If this class is in the outside or plantation, students can not only observe the looking of these plants in the nature but also smell these plants and compare its different habitats by contacting plants. This field trips more vivid than traditional learning and can make students have a deeper impression so they can sharpen understanding. In brief, compared to staying in the class, going on field trips is more vigorous. 理由二 不见了...... Some hold the opinion that studying in the class does better than goning field trips since that field trips may occur some accidents and there is no guarantee that every student can follow the teacher rather than playing nearby. So they believe that studying in the class is the best way for students because it's safe and teachers can observe which students doesn't attend class distinctly. Actually, there is no data pointing that learning in the claa is definite safety.and even if students sit in the classroom, they may hard concentrate on what teachers have taught. However, going field trips have some advantages such as arousing students' curiosity and deepening understanding, which studying in the classroom doesn't have. As far as I am concerned, field trips do better in students. In briefly, going on field trips contributes to students to deeped understanding and stimulating their curiosity and initiate, which are benefit to the goal that education delivers knowledge. So field trips are greater.
【作业2】 With the remarkable progress of people’s living standard, getting a good quality of education seems to be a very important thing, as education accounts for the knowledge acquired now but also influence the ability performed in the future. When it comes to the way to educate children, there are usually two approaches: to study by going field trips or to study in classroom. As for me, I prefer to learn knowledge in a more practical way such as field trips rather than learning in classroom. And there are some reasons and examples to illustrate my point of view. First and foremost, studying by field trips is a good way of cultivating interest. Take myself as an example. When I was in middle school, I took a field trip in a biology class to take a close look at the plants; the plants are varied in different shapes , functions and sizes, which are very interesting to discover. This trip, however, made myself interested in plants and even shaped my career life. Currently I worked as a nutritionist assistant, for I found my interest in biology in the field trip ten years ago. Besides, field trip does better in stripping up one's inquisitiveness about knowledge. It would be a very good chance for people to corporate theory with way practice. In other words, learning knowledge by taking field trip enables students to learn knowledge in different aspects and learn it deeply; field trip is a good way to portray interior factors to allow people to get to know things better or even become interested in things. Last time when I was in sophomore, my art history professor required us to finish a research paper about comprehending Renaissance art style and technology. In order to gave us a better way to understand the masterpieces, he firstly worked us through all the basic drawing theories, then he took us to the national museum to see the exhibition of Renaissance art. During the exhibition, we had a precious chance to take a very look at the masterpieces by many famous artists, which was very helpful for us to understand the drawing style, material and technology. This case demonstrates that many things could be felt and understood only by experience and practice, therefore field trip is definitely a good choice to cultivate interest and learn things deeply. Admittedly, field trip can be transformed into an obstacle if students go out for study too often. To be precise, it is easier for students to be distracted by other factors happened around than to concentrate on the knowledge discovering, which may finally decrease the study efficiency. In other words, field trip, though, as a way of learning things deeply and comprehensively, could also influence students' learning process in an inefficient way. However, learning in the classroom would not have such a problem of distraction. Therefore it would be an optimal solution to corporate field trip with basic in-class session to acquire knowledge. To put it in a nutshell, clearly justified through above-mentioned reasons and examples, students are worth taking field trips to acquire knowledge than learning only through lessons in classroom, for the field trips enable students to have a better understanding of knowledge and also cultivate interest to shape their future lives.
With the global education booming, education has been an indispensable part in people’s comprehensive development and a lot of parents are willing to offer plenty of money to their children’s study. Some parents insist that children should spend most of their time studying in classroom, which is a necessity to their promising future. However, as for me, going on field trips is more beneficial to students’ education than staying in the classroom at school is. Here are two cases in point that can best illustrate my point of view.  First of all, the field study contributions to better understanding of what students have learned. Learning in the classroom, students can only through the books and courseware aceess the knowledge, and in the field of learning process, students can get rid of the limitation of the classroom, what they have learned through many aspects, such as looking,sounding, smelling, feeling , not just staying on the books, thus deepens to the understanding of knowledges. For example a biology class, the teacher should take the students to understand all kinds of plants, if this lesson is in the botanical garden or outdoor, students not only can see various plants in the nature, but also can smell the different smells, to compare the different living environment. The field study is more vivid and interesting than in the classroom with books or computer course. So, compared with learning in the classroom, field study is better for the child's education. Next, field trips is more likely to arouse students curiosity of study . As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. If field study can stimulate students' interest, which indicates this way is better than in the classroom learning. I remember when I was in elementary school , one day, it has just rained, and the teacher took us out of the classroom, to felt the fresh air and pleasant scenery after a rain. At this point, everything in nature is so interesting to me, and everything worth mining. After that, the science class became my favorite course. Although the past many years, now I still remember the scene of the lesson. In contrast, for those who are in the classroom on the science of memory that has already gone. This example shows we went to the field in science classes, students feel like adventure, and believe that many people have a similar experience. For this reason, compared with learning in the classroom, field study[ing] is better for the child's education. Admittedly, some people thought staying in the classroom is better than going on field trips for children education. For the safety accidents will happen easily on a field trip, in contrast , students learning in classroom is more safe. As a matter of fact, that staying in the classroom is definitely safe hasn't got the evidence of data. The safety of studying is determined by teacher's organization and management, if it is not in that case, studying in classroom though that there is no guarantee that absolutely safe. Going on field trips that has advantages dramatically superior to the study in classroom, which is better to children education.  In a nutshell, field trips not only contributes to helping student to understand the knowledge better, but also arouse students' interests of study, which plays a vital role in achieving the goal of education. Thus I think going to field trips is more beneficial to student' education.
In this rapid improving time,with the development of society people concentrate more on education and put more and more money in it.How to edute has already become a popular topic.All of this time,there is no lack of the discussion of education in society.For example, which is better to children's education,study in classroom or study in field class.In my opinion,field classes is beter.The main reasons are listed as follows In the first place, field lesson is of great help to the better understanding of the knowledge we study. When we study in the classroom, we can only learn by books and multimedia courseware. We often have to understand the content stiffly. But if we can have a field lesson, students are able to get rid of the limit of the classroom. We are capable of observing the things we study at short range. We may even can do it ourselves to expand understanding. Comprehending things not only be confined to class but also from shape, size, color, smell, tactility and so on. For instance, when we have a mechanics class, the teacher need to introduce some machines and some corresponding operation method.If we can have a field lesson,we can go to the factory.Teacher can explain and at the same time he can demonstrate for students.May be we can operate the machines and experience the differences and similarity between them.Nonetheless,we can only stay in classroom,and understand the experience that provided from others through books and coursewares without comprehend by self.So,it is better to study by field lesson than study in classroom. In addition,field lesson does better in stirring up students' inquisitiveness about study.As the saying goes,interest is the best teacher.Field lesson can further motivate the interests of students and the desire of expploring.Just like me,when I participated in the metalworking practice,we went to the factory,and we study many kinds of basic skill in industrial machinery.Everyone got a saw,a hammer, a vernier caliper and so on.Then we used some mechine to proceed a series of working,such as welding,casting, fitter and so forth.It was a very interesting process.At last,we made a plane model and a hammer as a mark.In the production,I experienced some warning that our teacher had already told us.But I did not understanded it until I made mistakes.This example shows that the spoon-feeding teaching is boring and inefficiency,only will we feel imprssed when we undergo and try to work out.In the meantime,we have a desire to explore more actively.As a consequence,compare with study in classroom,field lesson is better to the education of students. Some people think study in classroom is better than field study。This is because in the classroom,teachers can regular students conviently.And teachers can also concentrate students' attention.But during the field study,teachers can not give consideration to every students.As far as I am concerned,students who do not listen carefully because of the boring content.If we can study outdoor,students can do something themselves.Everyone will attend.It is undeniable that filed study is so much the better than study indoor. All in all, there is supported by sound reasons that field lesson is helpful for students' understanding of knowladge.It can also stimulate their study interests and drive their enthusiasm.These are all benefit in the spread of education.So I think it is better to students.

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