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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 【作业一】
教育是一个国家进步与发展的基础,因此教育发展被看的越来越重要。学校在教育方式上也不断在改善,实地学习在教育中所占的比例在不断扩大,这种情况是否更适合学生呢?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由如下。
【作业二】
总的来说,实地学习可以更好满足孩子的学习需求,激发学习兴趣,带动学习积极性,因而对孩子的教育更好。
【作业三】
1.There has always been pientiful of discussion about education in sociaty.
2. As always, A relating to discuss of education in sociaty is abundant.
【作业四】
Education is the foundation of a nation's progress and development, so education development is regarded more and more importan. Education mode of school is improving continuously ,which caused the proportion of field trip in education expanding. Is this kind of circumstance more suitable for students' education? To my opinion,fied trip is better way of education for children, the reason following.
To sum up,fied triip can better meet the demand of children's study, stimulating interest in learning,driving student's learning,so ti's a better way for student's education.
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Education is the foundation of a nation's progress and development, so education development is regarded more and more importan【拼写错误 important】. Education mode of school is improving continuously ,【逗号前空格多余了】which caused the proportion of 【冠词错误,这里是特指要加the】field trip in education expanding. Is this kind of circumstance more suitable for students' education? To my opinion,【少了个空格】fied【拼写错了 field 】 trip is better way of education for children, the reason following. To sum up,fied【拼写错了 field 】 triip can better meet the demand of children's study, stimulating interest in learning,driving student's learning,so ti's【it‘s】 a better way for student's education. 整体表达还行,注意拼写细节。
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