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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# ［作业一］
教育是永远热门的话题，一场关于教育方式的讨论进行的如火如荼－究竟是实地学习好，还是在课室学习好呢？我的观点是实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。
［作业二］
综上，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，这些都有助于学生更好的去学习知识，提高成长地更快。因而实地学习对孩子的教育更好。
［作业三］
1. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education.
2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.
［作业四］
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-12 09:28:14 来自 托福作文咩
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Jasonnjut
污chun,我感觉你可以把经济发展引发教育投入做背景，这个我感觉是万能理由，跟学校学生一接触就是很好的背景，凑字数必备
2016-05-12 09:49
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Angelina Chun
评论 1 楼： 好的！谢谢杰森。反正我要多看你的作文真的棒！😁
2016-05-12 09:54
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OYoung
评论 1楼： 我就是这么做的，我就好奇了，为嘛你不给我点评
2016-05-12 20:29
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Jasonnjut
评论 3 楼： 他们给我点赞了，我才看到的😊
2016-05-12 20:30
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OYoung
评论 4楼： 我对你这么好，一个赞就把你收买啦，我还经常给你赞呢
2016-05-12 20:32
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Jasonnjut
评论 5 楼： 我现在帮你看，立刻
2016-05-12 20:33
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hploved
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take[直接really takes就行] advantage over just learning in the classroom.好像也没啥语法问题！
2016-05-12 20:49
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