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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# ［作业一］
教育是永远热门的话题，一场关于教育方式的讨论进行的如火如荼－究竟是实地学习好，还是在课室学习好呢？我的观点是实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。
［作业二］
综上，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，这些都有助于学生更好的去学习知识，提高成长地更快。因而实地学习对孩子的教育更好。
［作业三］
1. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education.
2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.
［作业四］
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-12 09:28:14 来自 托福作文咩
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Jasonnjut
污chun,我感觉你可以把经济发展引发教育投入做背景，这个我感觉是万能理由，跟学校学生一接触就是很好的背景，凑字数必备
2016-05-12 09:49
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Angelina Chun
评论 1 楼： 好的！谢谢杰森。反正我要多看你的作文真的棒！😁
2016-05-12 09:54
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OYoung
评论 1楼： 我就是这么做的，我就好奇了，为嘛你不给我点评
2016-05-12 20:29
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Jasonnjut
评论 3 楼： 他们给我点赞了，我才看到的😊
2016-05-12 20:30
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OYoung
评论 4楼： 我对你这么好，一个赞就把你收买啦，我还经常给你赞呢
2016-05-12 20:32
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Jasonnjut
评论 5 楼： 我现在帮你看，立刻
2016-05-12 20:33
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hploved
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take[直接really takes就行] advantage over just learning in the classroom.好像也没啥语法问题！
2016-05-12 20:49
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There has always been plentiful of debate about education. As always, debate relating to education is abundant. 開頭： As society develops, the increasing correlation between education and students’ personal success calls for improvement and innovation of education. Some who stick at traditional teaching methods insist on their students studying in the classroom, while other come up with a different kind of field trips. Personally, I think conducting field study may be better for students. Here are my reasons. 結尾： In conclusion, field study, with its efficiency of maintaining students' interest and facilitating their absorption of knowledge, outshines in-class teaching method. Thus, I believe it is better for students.
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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# The future of the country hinges on how much attention put into the education per se. Therefore, which kinds of education module is better for children is a question, like going on field trips or stay at classroom, which one is better? In my opinion, going on field trips are beneficial to students. In conclusion, going on field trips are useful expend students’ scope. And understand what they learn, that’s beneficial to improve them study interested, for the sake of education, going on field trips are greater. There has always been plentiful of arguments of education. As always, discussion relating to education is aboundant.
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Jasonnjut
【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和背景段，按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。 第一步：找出作文题目中的关键词。 第二步：根据关键词描述一个现象。 第三步：根据题目，给出自己的看法。 【作业二】 请结合上述观点、理由和总结段，仿写一个新的总结段。 总结段可包含两部分内容：1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话：一直也来，社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1. There has always been plentiful of A about B 2. As always, A relating to B is abundant 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。 The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is blooming and more finances can be poured into education, especially in the places where students can acquire knowledge and master skills. Along with this phenomenon comes a heated discussion: is going on field trips better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school? As for me, I have no doubt in proclaiming the importance of the latter and I would explore the rationalities behind this idea in this following paragraphs. To put it into nutshell, I can safely draw a conclusion that children can learn much from going on field trips than staying in the classroom at school. Just as an idiom that goes, no practice, no gain in one’s wit. The most effective way for people to master knowledge is to put what we have learned into practice and check if they are rational.
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【作业一】 实地学习是一种让学生能够户外体验并且同时学习知识的一种教育形式。现如今，学校与个人对实地学习对于教育质量的重要性各自持有不同的观点。有人认为课堂学习才是学习的根本，且对学生益处最大。但我以为，实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由如下。 【作业二】 总而言之，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，更能激发他们的学习兴趣，使他们对学习的观念又重新的认识，并对其产生更深远的意义。所以，实地学习比课堂学习更好。 作业三】 1. There has always been plentiful of social discussions about education. 2. As always, discussions relating to education are abundant in our society. 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。 Field trips are a type of education that enables the students to learn and experience outdoors. Schools and individuals hold distinctive opinions on the importance of field trips to education quality. Some contend that staying in a classroom is the fundamental way of children getting involved and thus the best. However, I regard this assertion as arbitrary and believe that field trips are better for children’s education. My reasons and examples are paid as follows. In summary, field trips contribute to a more thorough acquirement of knowledge and motivate the children to discover more about that particular subject, having long-term benefits to kids. Therefore, field trips are preferable to learning in a classroom and should be encouraged.

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