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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# ［作业一］
教育是永远热门的话题，一场关于教育方式的讨论进行的如火如荼－究竟是实地学习好，还是在课室学习好呢？我的观点是实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。
［作业二］
综上，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，这些都有助于学生更好的去学习知识，提高成长地更快。因而实地学习对孩子的教育更好。
［作业三］
1. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education.
2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.
［作业四］
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-12 09:28:14 来自 托福作文咩
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Jasonnjut
污chun,我感觉你可以把经济发展引发教育投入做背景，这个我感觉是万能理由，跟学校学生一接触就是很好的背景，凑字数必备
2016-05-12 09:49
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Angelina Chun
评论 1 楼： 好的！谢谢杰森。反正我要多看你的作文真的棒！😁
2016-05-12 09:54
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OYoung
评论 1楼： 我就是这么做的，我就好奇了，为嘛你不给我点评
2016-05-12 20:29
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Jasonnjut
评论 3 楼： 他们给我点赞了，我才看到的😊
2016-05-12 20:30
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OYoung
评论 4楼： 我对你这么好，一个赞就把你收买啦，我还经常给你赞呢
2016-05-12 20:32
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Jasonnjut
评论 5 楼： 我现在帮你看，立刻
2016-05-12 20:33
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hploved
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take[直接really takes就行] advantage over just learning in the classroom.好像也没啥语法问题！
2016-05-12 20:49
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「作业一」 生活水平的提高使得人们在教育上面的投入也有所增加，人为本认知的不断深入伴随着教育方式的多样化。由此也就教育问题引发了一系列的热议，比如教室学习和实地学习相比，到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好。在我看来，实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。 「作业二」 总而言之，实地学习即能够帮助学生更好的理解所学知识，也能激发他们对于学习的兴趣，带动学生学习的积极性和主动性，这些都更益于实现之时的传播，因此对学生的教育更好。 「作业四」 With the development of industrialization, life standard's improvment causes more investment on education and ideological understanding deepening unstoppably extends pedagogics diversified. Accordingly, when it comes to education, there has always been plentiful of discussions about it. For example, which one is better between classroom learning and field-based studying? From my perspective, learning outside is better for students to acquire knowledge and I have the following the reasons elaborated upon my upper point. Generally speaking, field lessons help students understand the new idea profoundly and at the same time. In addition, this method stimulate their delight in studying and cultivate their enthusiasm, initiative and creativity which are conducive to diffusion of knowledge. Consequently, field lesson is an important pedagogics for students to learn. 「作业三」 1. There has always been plentiful of discussions about education. 2. As always, discussions relating to education is abundant.
ccCindy
【作业一】 Nelson Mandela 说教育可以改变世界。随着社会的发展，科技的进步，人们越来越意识到教育的重要性，教育方式也在不断地改进和完善。一直也来，社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如，教室学习和实地学习相比，到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好？在我看来，实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。 【作业二】 简言之，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，使学生可以感受到学习的乐趣，因而更有益于教育的发展。 【作业三】 一直也来，社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1. There has always been plentiful of A about B There has always been plentiful of discussion about education in society. 2. As always, A relating to B is abundant As always , the topic relating to education is abundant. 【作业四】 As Nelson Mandela saying“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. As society developing and technology advanced, people become more aware of the significance of education. Increasingly, education mode is change and improvement. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education in society. For example, compared with studying in classroom and going for field trip , which one is beneficial for students? As far as i am concerned, field trip is better for students, there are two reasons to support my claim. All in all, field tips helps students comprehensively understand the knowledge . It could also simulate students interest in learning. Furthermore, students feel comfortable and enjoyable through field trip . So filed trip benefit the develop of education.
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Recently an interesting question has aroused among teachers: Is going on field trip better for children’s education than staying in classroom? Some people claim that staying in classroom is their first choice, for it is the easiest method for teachers to control the qualities of education. The way I see it, students who usually go to field trips will get better construction of knowledge. My viewpoint is based on following reasons. In a word, going on field contributes to comprehension of what students learned and accords with their nature in study, and I think these examples have already proven the validity of my view point.
伯克利斯基
【作业一】 实地学习是一种让学生能够户外体验并且同时学习知识的一种教育形式。现如今，学校与个人对实地学习对于教育质量的重要性各自持有不同的观点。有人认为课堂学习才是学习的根本，且对学生益处最大。但我以为，实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由如下。 【作业二】 总而言之，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，更能激发他们的学习兴趣，使他们对学习的观念又重新的认识，并对其产生更深远的意义。所以，实地学习比课堂学习更好。 作业三】 1. There has always been plentiful of social discussions about education. 2. As always, discussions relating to education are abundant in our society. 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。 Field trips are a type of education that enables the students to learn and experience outdoors. Schools and individuals hold distinctive opinions on the importance of field trips to education quality. Some contend that staying in a classroom is the fundamental way of children getting involved and thus the best. However, I regard this assertion as arbitrary and believe that field trips are better for children’s education. My reasons and examples are paid as follows. In summary, field trips contribute to a more thorough acquirement of knowledge and motivate the children to discover more about that particular subject, having long-term benefits to kids. Therefore, field trips are preferable to learning in a classroom and should be encouraged.

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