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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# ［作业一］
教育是永远热门的话题，一场关于教育方式的讨论进行的如火如荼－究竟是实地学习好，还是在课室学习好呢？我的观点是实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。
［作业二］
综上，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，这些都有助于学生更好的去学习知识，提高成长地更快。因而实地学习对孩子的教育更好。
［作业三］
1. There has always been plentiful of discussion about education.
2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.
［作业四］
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons.

To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take advantage over just learning in the classroom.
2016-05-12 09:28:14 来自 托福作文咩
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Jasonnjut
污chun,我感觉你可以把经济发展引发教育投入做背景，这个我感觉是万能理由，跟学校学生一接触就是很好的背景，凑字数必备
2016-05-12 09:49
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Angelina Chun
评论 1 楼： 好的！谢谢杰森。反正我要多看你的作文真的棒！😁
2016-05-12 09:54
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OYoung
评论 1楼： 我就是这么做的，我就好奇了，为嘛你不给我点评
2016-05-12 20:29
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Jasonnjut
评论 3 楼： 他们给我点赞了，我才看到的😊
2016-05-12 20:30
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OYoung
评论 4楼： 我对你这么好，一个赞就把你收买啦，我还经常给你赞呢
2016-05-12 20:32
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Jasonnjut
评论 5 楼： 我现在帮你看，立刻
2016-05-12 20:33
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hploved
Education can always earn enough attention from the public which means it is quite a hit that we discuss often. Recently, a debate about education methods is going on --- what method is on earth better to implement. The field trip or just learning in the classroom? My point is field trip is way too better than learning in the classroom. My view is based on the following reasons. To recap, field trip can help student get a better comprehension about what they learnt as well as can arouse their interests about learning. All theses can push the students to be proactive to improve themselves faster. It is long term beneficial for a student. Hence, I do believe that field trip does really take[直接really takes就行] advantage over just learning in the classroom.好像也没啥语法问题！
2016-05-12 20:49
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【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和背景段，按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。 第一步：找出作文题目中的关键词。 第二步：根据关键词描述一个现象。 第三步：根据题目，给出自己的看法。 Going on filed trips/education/studying in the classroom 【作业二】 请结合上述观点、理由和总结段，仿写一个新的总结段。 总结段可包含两部分内容：1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。 随着现在社会的进步，以及教育在国家发展中占据着重要的地位，现在国家对教育越发的重视了。投入的教育资金也在不断的上升，这使得教育方式也不断得到创新变革。一直以来，教育都是社会的热点话题。例如，教室学习和实地学习相比，到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好？在我看来，实地学习对孩子的教育更好，理由有以下两个方面。 简单地说，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，带动学生的学习积极性，这些都有利于实现教育传播知识的目的，因而对孩子的教育更好。 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话：一直也来，社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1. There has always been plentiful of A about B 2. As always, A relating to B is abundant 1. There has always been plentiful of topics about education. 2. As always, the discussions relating to education is abundant. 【作业四】 请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。 As the nation’s economy soars, chinese society is increasingly diverse. Education plays a vital role all the time, nowadays, the Department of Education has attached great importance to the development of education. A large number of resources are put into a lot of projects in education, giving a boost to the reform in education. As always, the discussions relating to education are still on the lips of many individuals. For instance, which one is the better way to teach children, studying in the classroom or going on filed trips? Form my perspective, I prefer going on filed trips. Two reasons are as follows. To put it simply, going on filed trips gains a better understanding of what students have learned, and the way it also does better in stirring up students’ inquisitiveness about knowledge and stimulating children’s learning initiative, which have an advantage of spreading knowledge, as well as contributing to the children’s education.
Lucky-Ice
作业1 The world's significsnt development causes the soar attention to the education. To make the students well educted, the ways to teach students has irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me. 作业2 In a nutshell, studying on firld trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get deeper understanding to the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
ChannyLi
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叶夫Knife
如何在有限的资源条件下对学生进行更有效的教育引发了人们的探讨。很多人认为当前在教室里授课就是一种很好的方式。然而另外一种有意思的，尽管不怎么被注意到的观点认为实地学习对孩子的教育更好。我认同这一观点 作业二： 总之，实地学习可以激发学生的兴趣，调动他们的积极性从而更好的理解所学知识。因此，我认为实地学习对学生学习更有帮助。 作业三 there has always been plentiful of discussion about education in society. as always, discussion relating to education is abundant in society. 作业四 there has plentiful of methods about study such as Confucius‘s "to teach students in accordance with their aptitude". with the accelerated era developing, people created much more ways to study better and easier.there are two representation: field study and classroom study. some people based on these two method derived a discussion about which one more suit to students so that they can study better. in my point of view, field study more helpful to student's learning.
Zora奔向US
【作业一】仿写一个新的背景段。 教育是培养给国家发展带来持续动力的人才的根本途径。随着经济、生活水平的日益提高，人们的观念也发生了转变，对教育越来越重视。有些学校提供了实地考察的学习模式，这与传统模式相比到底哪个更好，这一问题在社会引起了广泛关注。我认为实地考察的模式更好，理由如下。 Education is one of the most essential ways to cultivate outstanding talents for the country. And with the remarkable development of the quality of people's living standard, attitudes towards education have also changed a lot and more attention is paid to the education. Going on field trips as a new educational mode appears, and the question of whether it is better than traditional type of education arouses a heated discussion in society. As far as I am concerned, going on field trips is my preference. My specific reasons and examples are as follows. 【作业二】仿写一个新的总结段。 简言之，实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识，也更能激发他们的学习兴趣，带动学生的学习积极性，这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的，因而对孩子的教育更好。 Briefly, going on field trips does better in helping students handling the knowledge easily and meanwhile, it is more likely to arouse students' interest in study,both of which meet the need of spreading knowledge more efficiently. Thus, it is better for students' education. 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话：一直也来，社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1.There has always been plentiful of discussion about education. 2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.

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