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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 【作业一】 十年树木,百年树人。随着社会变化,教育领域也发生了巨大变化。一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由如下。
【作业二】简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。
【作业三】1. There has always been plentiful of debate about enducation.
2.As always, debate relating to education is abundant.
【作业四】
An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in the field of education. There has always been plentiful of debate about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow.
In short, field trips teaching helps students to understand the knowledge better. Plus, it is better at stimulating students' delight in information of books to drive learning initiative. All of above benefit the achievement of aim of imparting knowledge, which is confirmed good for kids' development.
2016-05-12 09:28:09 来自 托福作文咩
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写的真好,除了,below一个typo!学习榜样!好多高级词汇,好多语块!!!手动点👍!!
2016-05-12 09:38
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小伙伴总结段写的真漂亮。收藏了! An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in 【可以换成 occurred in ,take place in 感觉用的人有点多】the field of education. There has always been【可以换成这个 has historically been】 plentiful of debate about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose 【to】learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow. 😚😚😚
2016-05-12 09:42
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好棒哦!!学习学习!!
2016-05-12 15:54
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An old Chinese saying goes, 'It takes ten years to grow trees but a hundred years to rear people '.With the remarkable progress of the society, enormous changes have taken place in the field of education. There has always been plentiful of debate[s] about education. For example, which has better influence on children, in terms of field trips or classroom teaching. Personally speaking, it is more reasonable to choose learn things in the real situation. My reasons and examples are given bellow. In short, field trips teaching helps students to understand the knowledge better[可以把understand改成gain a better understanding of语法没问题就要开始追求语言啦]. Plus, it is better at stimulating students' delight in information of books to drive learning initiative. All of above benefit the achievement of aim of imparting knowledge, which is confirmed good for kids' development.
2016-05-12 20:45
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评论 4 楼: 嗯嗯 谢谢啦😊😊
2016-05-12 20:47
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1] 百年大计,教育为本。随着社会的发展,人们对教育的关注越来越多,投入的时间和金钱比重也越来越大,这使得教育方式也不断得到创新变革。一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由有以下两个方面。 2] 简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。 3] There has always been plentiful of debates about education. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant. 4] Centenary plan bases on education. With the development of society, people pay more attention to education and spend more time and money on it, which make eduction creative and evolutionary constantly. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant. For instance, which way, going on field trips is better for children’s education and staying in the classroom at school, is better one on education. As the point of my view, going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school. There are two reasons as given below. In brief, field study is conducive to better understanding what students learn, and arousing their interest of study, spurring students‘ enthusiasm. All of these benefit the educational goal of imparting knowledge. Therefore, it shows more helpful about education.
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