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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 【作业一】
请结合上述观点、理由和背景段,按照下述步骤仿写一个新的背景段。
第一步:找出作文题目中的关键词。
第二步:根据关键词描述一个现象。
第三步:根据题目,给出自己的看法。

【作业二】
请结合上述观点、理由和总结段,仿写一个新的总结段。
总结段可包含两部分内容:1. 对观点的重申。2. 对理由的总结。

【作业三】
请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。
1. There has always been plentiful of A about B
2. As always, A relating to B is abundant

【作业四】
请分别将你在作业一和作业二中写的中文翻译成英文。
The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is blooming and more finances can be poured into education, especially in the places where students can acquire knowledge and master skills. Along with this phenomenon comes a heated discussion: is going on field trips better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school? As for me, I have no doubt in proclaiming the importance of the latter and I would explore the rationalities behind this idea in this following paragraphs.

To put it into nutshell, I can safely draw a conclusion that children can learn much from going on field trips than staying in the classroom at school. Just as an idiom that goes, no practice, no gain in one’s wit. The most effective way for people to master knowledge is to put what we have learned into practice and check if they are rational.
2016-05-12 09:26:12 来自 托福作文咩
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2016-05-12 09:27
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写的真好,不知道说什么默默手动点?!就是,Along with this phenomenon comes a heated discussion: is going on field trips better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school? 这句话中间的冒号,要加嘛。还是我又是写作细节白痴了?
2016-05-12 09:32
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评论 2 楼: 要的,冒号一般是用来阐明后面的内容指代这个discussion
2016-05-12 09:35
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评论 3 楼: !!!!!又学习了一波!要多看你的作文,就这么决定了?
2016-05-12 09:39
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评论 4 楼: 爆照就让你看
2016-05-12 09:41
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评论 5 楼: 不要和欧阳学这些坏习惯真是的?
2016-05-12 09:45
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牛*牛*牛*
2016-05-12 20:11
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The past several decades have witnessed that the world’s economy is blooming and more finances can be poured into education, especially in the places where students can acquire knowledge and master skills. Along with this phenomenon comes a heated discussion: is going on field trips better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school? As for me, I have no doubt in proclaiming the importance of the latter and I would explore the rationalities behind this idea in this following paragraphs. To put it into nutshell, I can safely draw a conclusion that children can learn much from going on field trips than staying in the classroom at school. Just as an idiom that goes, no practice, no gain in one’s wit. The most effective way for people to master knowledge is to put what we have learned into practice and check if they are rational.[感觉最后还加一句和题目观点相关的东西比较好]
2016-05-12 20:31
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评论 3 楼: 我学习了 污酱厉害
2016-05-12 20:37
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作业一 在这个快速发展的年代,随着社会的发展,人们对于教育的关注也越来越多,投入的金钱和精力越来越多。 如何教育才是最好的方式已经成为了一个热点话题。一直以来,社会上都不乏对教育方式的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由有以下两个方面。 作业二 总而言之,实地学习不仅有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。 作业三 1. There has always been plentiful of the discussion about education. 2. As always, the talk relating to education is abundant. 作业四 In this rapid improving time,with the development of society people concentrate more on education and put more and more money in it.How to edute has already become a popular topic.All of this time,there is no lack of the discussion of education in society.For example, which is better to children's education,study in classroom or study in field class.In my opinion,field classes is beter.The main reasons are listed as follows. All in all, there is supported by sound reasons that field lesson is helpful for students' understanding of knowladge.It can also stimulate their study interests and drive their enthusiasm.These are all benefit in the spread of education.So I think it is better to students.