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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 作业1
The world's significsnt development causes the soar attention to the education. To make the students well educted, the ways to teach students has irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me.

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In a nutshell, studying on firld trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get deeper understanding to the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 09:05:02 来自 托福作文咩
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说问题controversy废话太多,一句话两个观点硬是被你扳成两方认为的长句子,没有实质东西,多看看范文吧
2016-05-12 09:40
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评论 1楼 嗯好的谢谢
2016-05-12 15:28
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作业1 The world's significsnt[拼写错误] development causes the soar[感觉这个词不太好,也不能修饰attention直接用increasing就行] attention to the education. To make the students well educted[拼写问题], the ways to teach students has[主谓不一致ways] irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children[直接说支持反方面观点就行不用把话题说两遍]. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me. 作业2 In a nutshell, studying on firld[单词拼写] trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get [a] deeper understanding to[to改成of/get变成gain更好] the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 20:12
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评论 3 楼: 谢谢= =...这次打完之后没有检查拼写= =
2016-05-12 20:16
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评论 3 楼: 下一次我再写的仔细一点..
2016-05-12 20:17
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评论 1 楼: 实质东西怎么写...就是说理吗= =范文买了还没到...
2016-05-12 20:18
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评论 3 楼: hp,实质东西怎么写..说理吗...多扯理由扯好处?
2016-05-12 20:19
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评论 7 楼: 其实Jason就是说你说的不太简洁哈,语法没问题,但是考试的时候最好精简一点。比如说你说观点的时候直接说背景+有人说……他们的原因+你的观点/就行
2016-05-12 20:22
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评论 8 楼: 嗯谢谢
2016-05-12 20:29
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1] 百年大计,教育为本。随着社会的发展,人们对教育的关注越来越多,投入的时间和金钱比重也越来越大,这使得教育方式也不断得到创新变革。一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。例如,教室学习和实地学习相比,到底哪一种方式对孩子的教育更好?在我看来,实地学习对孩子的教育更好,理由有以下两个方面。 2] 简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。 3] There has always been plentiful of debates about education. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant. 4] Centenary plan bases on education. With the development of society, people pay more attention to education and spend more time and money on it, which make eduction creative and evolutionary constantly. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant. For instance, which way, going on field trips is better for children’s education and staying in the classroom at school, is better one on education. As the point of my view, going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school. There are two reasons as given below. In brief, field study is conducive to better understanding what students learn, and arousing their interest of study, spurring students‘ enthusiasm. All of these benefit the educational goal of imparting knowledge. Therefore, it shows more helpful about education.

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