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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 作业1
The world's significsnt development causes the soar attention to the education. To make the students well educted, the ways to teach students has irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me.

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In a nutshell, studying on firld trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get deeper understanding to the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 09:05:02 来自 托福作文咩
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说问题controversy废话太多,一句话两个观点硬是被你扳成两方认为的长句子,没有实质东西,多看看范文吧
2016-05-12 09:40
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评论 1楼 嗯好的谢谢
2016-05-12 15:28
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作业1 The world's significsnt[拼写错误] development causes the soar[感觉这个词不太好,也不能修饰attention直接用increasing就行] attention to the education. To make the students well educted[拼写问题], the ways to teach students has[主谓不一致ways] irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children[直接说支持反方面观点就行不用把话题说两遍]. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me. 作业2 In a nutshell, studying on firld[单词拼写] trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get [a] deeper understanding to[to改成of/get变成gain更好] the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 20:12
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评论 3 楼: 谢谢= =...这次打完之后没有检查拼写= =
2016-05-12 20:16
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评论 3 楼: 下一次我再写的仔细一点..
2016-05-12 20:17
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评论 1 楼: 实质东西怎么写...就是说理吗= =范文买了还没到...
2016-05-12 20:18
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评论 3 楼: hp,实质东西怎么写..说理吗...多扯理由扯好处?
2016-05-12 20:19
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评论 7 楼: 其实Jason就是说你说的不太简洁哈,语法没问题,但是考试的时候最好精简一点。比如说你说观点的时候直接说背景+有人说……他们的原因+你的观点/就行
2016-05-12 20:22
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评论 8 楼: 嗯谢谢
2016-05-12 20:29
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【作业一】仿写一个新的背景段。 教育是培养给国家发展带来持续动力的人才的根本途径。随着经济、生活水平的日益提高,人们的观念也发生了转变,对教育越来越重视。有些学校提供了实地考察的学习模式,这与传统模式相比到底哪个更好,这一问题在社会引起了广泛关注。我认为实地考察的模式更好,理由如下。 Education is one of the most essential ways to cultivate outstanding talents for the country. And with the remarkable development of the quality of people's living standard, attitudes towards education have also changed a lot and more attention is paid to the education. Going on field trips as a new educational mode appears, and the question of whether it is better than traditional type of education arouses a heated discussion in society. As far as I am concerned, going on field trips is my preference. My specific reasons and examples are as follows. 【作业二】仿写一个新的总结段。 简言之,实地学习有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,也更能激发他们的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都更益于实现教育传播知识的目的,因而对孩子的教育更好。 Briefly, going on field trips does better in helping students handling the knowledge easily and meanwhile, it is more likely to arouse students' interest in study,both of which meet the need of spreading knowledge more efficiently. Thus, it is better for students' education. 【作业三】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:一直也来,社会上都不乏涉及教育的讨论。 1.There has always been plentiful of discussion about education. 2. As always, discussion relating to education is abundant.