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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 作业1
The world's significsnt development causes the soar attention to the education. To make the students well educted, the ways to teach students has irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me.

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In a nutshell, studying on firld trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get deeper understanding to the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 09:05:02 来自 托福作文咩
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说问题controversy废话太多,一句话两个观点硬是被你扳成两方认为的长句子,没有实质东西,多看看范文吧
2016-05-12 09:40
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评论 1楼 嗯好的谢谢
2016-05-12 15:28
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作业1 The world's significsnt[拼写错误] development causes the soar[感觉这个词不太好,也不能修饰attention直接用increasing就行] attention to the education. To make the students well educted[拼写问题], the ways to teach students has[主谓不一致ways] irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children[直接说支持反方面观点就行不用把话题说两遍]. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me. 作业2 In a nutshell, studying on firld[单词拼写] trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get [a] deeper understanding to[to改成of/get变成gain更好] the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 20:12
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评论 3 楼: 谢谢= =...这次打完之后没有检查拼写= =
2016-05-12 20:16
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评论 3 楼: 下一次我再写的仔细一点..
2016-05-12 20:17
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评论 1 楼: 实质东西怎么写...就是说理吗= =范文买了还没到...
2016-05-12 20:18
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评论 3 楼: hp,实质东西怎么写..说理吗...多扯理由扯好处?
2016-05-12 20:19
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评论 7 楼: 其实Jason就是说你说的不太简洁哈,语法没问题,但是考试的时候最好精简一点。比如说你说观点的时候直接说背景+有人说……他们的原因+你的观点/就行
2016-05-12 20:22
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评论 8 楼: 嗯谢谢
2016-05-12 20:29
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