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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 8# 作业1
The world's significsnt development causes the soar attention to the education. To make the students well educted, the ways to teach students has irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me.

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In a nutshell, studying on firld trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get deeper understanding to the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 09:05:02 来自 托福作文咩
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说问题controversy废话太多,一句话两个观点硬是被你扳成两方认为的长句子,没有实质东西,多看看范文吧
2016-05-12 09:40
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评论 1楼 嗯好的谢谢
2016-05-12 15:28
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作业1 The world's significsnt[拼写错误] development causes the soar[感觉这个词不太好,也不能修饰attention直接用increasing就行] attention to the education. To make the students well educted[拼写问题], the ways to teach students has[主谓不一致ways] irritate a great controversy between the ones who believe going on field trips is better for children’s education than staying in the classroom at school and the ones who consider staying in the classroom can be more beneficial to children[直接说支持反方面观点就行不用把话题说两遍]. Personally speaking, going on field trips seems more logical to me. 作业2 In a nutshell, studying on firld[单词拼写] trips really makes sense. In this case, students will concentrate better on study and get [a] deeper understanding to[to改成of/get变成gain更好] the content mentioned by teacher. Most importantly, being on the field can stimulate their imagination, which means creation to them.
2016-05-12 20:12
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评论 3 楼: 谢谢= =...这次打完之后没有检查拼写= =
2016-05-12 20:16
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评论 3 楼: 下一次我再写的仔细一点..
2016-05-12 20:17
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评论 1 楼: 实质东西怎么写...就是说理吗= =范文买了还没到...
2016-05-12 20:18
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评论 3 楼: hp,实质东西怎么写..说理吗...多扯理由扯好处?
2016-05-12 20:19
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评论 7 楼: 其实Jason就是说你说的不太简洁哈,语法没问题,但是考试的时候最好精简一点。比如说你说观点的时候直接说背景+有人说……他们的原因+你的观点/就行
2016-05-12 20:22
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评论 8 楼: 嗯谢谢
2016-05-12 20:29
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教育是国家的第一要务。青少年是国家的未来。一个国家未来的兴旺发达都取决于青少年的受教育程度。所以人们对教育问题有了更多的关注和投入,而教育方式也渐渐多元化起来。而教室学习和实地学习是什么关注的重点。有人认为教室学习对学生的学习更有利,然而我不这么认为。有以下理由证明我的观点。 简而言之,实地学习不仅有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,而且能激发学生的学习兴趣,带动学生的学习积极性,这些都有助于实现教育传播知识的目的,对学生自生的教育发展也很有帮助。 1.there has always been plentiful of discussion about education. 2.as always, discussion relating to education is abundant Education is essential to a country's development, and children is future of one country. Whether a country could be flourish always depends on children's schooling. In modern society, more and more people pay close attention to children's attention and class venue has aroused controversy among society. Some people claim that classroom studying is more conducive to children education. However, i do not thing such state can hold water. My viewpoint is supported by the following reasons. To put in a nutshell, field studying not only can contribute to students' understanding of knowledge they have learned, but also can stirring up students' inquisitiveness of studying. Both are of great help to spread knowledge, and besides that, students themselves achieve huge development through field education,

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