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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 「作业一」
有人认为教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习很可能分散学生的注意力,有的学生本身的自制力就比较差,如果让他们到户外活动,不仅没有令他们对所学知识没有了解,还浪费了本应该在课堂学习的时间。事实上,并没有证据表明,在课堂上的教授会比实地学习更有效。另外,学生是否能狗专注于所学知识,是在于老师的引导,也在于学生自己的态度。就算在课堂上,如果老师教课的水平不高,学生自制力较差,那还不如在实地感受来的更佳直观。
「作业二」
Some people consider that it is more efficiency of studying in classroon than of field lessons, because field lessons are likely to distract students' concentration on what they should observe. If some students have weak self control, taking part in field lessons, they would barely not only gain the relevant knowldege, but also spend time on what is should spend on schools. Virtually, there is no evidence showing that daily learning in school is more effective than that outside. In addition, whether studnets could focus on knowledge or subjects relys on teaching method and students' attitude. Even if studying in class, students cannot definitely acquire more knowledge when teathers are lower teaching skills and students are unself-control. At least, under same condition, outside learning gives students more direct perception.
「作业三」
1. In fact, no data indicates that learning in classroom is definitely safty.
2. Actually, there is no data pointing to a phenomenon that studying in school is definitely safty.
3. As a matter of fact, learning inside is definitly safty hasn't got the evidence of data.
2016-05-11 12:40:18 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people consider that it is more efficiency of studying in classroon[classroom] than of field lessons, because field lessons are likely to distract students' concentration[distraction 本身有分心的意思,不用加concentration也可以吧] on what they should observe. If some students have weak self control【self-control】, taking part in field lessons, they would barely not only gain the relevant knowldege,[knowledge] but also spend time on what is should spend on schools. Virtually, there is no evidence showing that daily learning in school is more effective than that outside. In addition, whether studnets[students] could focus on knowledge or subjects relys 【relies】on teaching method and students' attitude. Even if studying in class, students cannot definitely acquire more knowledge when teathers are lower teaching skills[poor skill更好,lower不准确吧] and students are unself-control. 【unself-control没这个单词吧】At least, under same condition, outside learning gives students more direct perception. Even if studying in class, students cannot definitely acquire more knowledge when teathers are lower teaching skills,and students are unself-control. At least, under same condition, outside learning gives students more direct perception. ——> Teacher with poor teaching method and student with less self-control, knowledge can hardly reach the kids’ mind. 独立主格的句式。不能完全按汉译翻译,最后一句的表达太中式了。另外最后没有总结扣题的句子啊。
2016-05-11 13:48
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2016-05-11 13:51
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作业一 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为在教室中,能够分散学生注意力的干扰因素比较少,而在室外有很多东西都会影响学生集中精力。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室中,学生的注意力就更加集中。注意力集中与否取决于老师的讲课,如果老师讲课不足够吸引人,在教室学习效率也不会高。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 作业二 1、In fact, no statistics indicate that studying in the classroom is absolute safe. 2、Actually, there is no statistics pointing to it that studying in the classroom is absolute safe. 3、As a matter of fact, studying in the classroom is absolute safe hasn't got the evidence of any statistics. 作业三 A majority of people hold the view that studying in the classroom is better than studying in the field. They point out that the interference factors which will distract students' attentions are fewer in the classroom, while plenty of factors outdoors will disturb the students' listening. Actually, there is no statistics poingting to it that studying in the classroom can improve the students' concentrations. Whether the students' can focus their attentions on the knowledge depends on the levels of the teachers so that they cannot study efficiently if the teachers' lesson are not fascinating enough. However,compared with studying in the classroom, going on field trips is better due to its several imcomparable advantages.

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