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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为学生可能会因为对实物或者活动过于兴奋而忘记学习知识的目的。但是正是因为这种兴趣能帮助他们更好的记忆这次课的过程,课后也有可能会自己想知道这个方面的知识而自主学习。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】1. In fact, no data indicates teaching in classroom is absolutely safe.
2.Actually, there is no data pointing to having courses in classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, having courses in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the evidence of data.
【作业三】Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 09:45:13 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such[a] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves【感觉有点奇怪】 after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits【你这个词是动词还是名次?】 more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
写得很好,有的地方有点奇怪,但我也不知道怎么表达更好…好心塞

2016-05-11 09:55
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Some people believe that classroom education does【is】 better than field trips. Since they may too【to】 excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is 【缺少介词 of 】such interest 【缺少介词 in】attracting them that can help them to remember the process【of】 leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed【 用词不当 ,应该是打错了 Field】 trips【缺少介词 to】 teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits. 注意一下介词的使用,会让你的表达更精准
2016-05-11 12:59
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however 这句改的好多了,写太长了,后悔了。最后一句的是Field trips teaching 名词修饰名词,不用加介词吧。
2016-05-11 13:05
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评论 1 楼: which benefits 的先行词是teaching 这里是动词 however那句写太长了,后悔了-_-
2016-05-11 13:07
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may [be] too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such [an] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more[不要more因为incomparable就是无可匹敌] incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 19:32
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评论 5 楼: 3Q ^-^
2016-05-11 19:36
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评论 3楼 刚想起来好像有一点我给你说错了,你自己发现可就好,脑抽了不好意思小伙伴……😜
2016-05-12 00:05
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【作业一】 有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习容易发生一些安全事故,而在教室学习相对比较安全。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。安全与否取决于老师的组织管理,如果老师管理不当,在教室学习也不能保证绝对安全。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… In fact, no date indicates that studying in classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… Actually, there is no pointing to indicate that studying in classroom is absolutely safe. 3.As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. As a matter of fact, studying in classroom hasn’t got the evidence of absolute safety. 【作业三】 有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习容易发生一些安全事故,而在教室学习相对比较安全。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。安全与否取决于老师的组织管理,如果老师管理不当,在教室学习也不能保证绝对安全。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 Some individuals hold the view that studying in classroom is better than field trip. As far as they are concerned, it is easily to happened some safe accident in field trip.Actually, there is no pointing to indicate that studying in classroom is absolutely safe. Danger or not depend on teacher’s organization. If teacher organized inappropriate, studying in classroom also couldn’t ensure absolute safety. In contrast , field trip has a unique advantage which studying in the classroom can not match. So going on a field trip is more vital for students’ education.
【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为在教室学习效率更高,老师可以在固定的时间内传授更多的知识。实际上,效率的高低取决于学生,并不是老师。在教室里上课老师会讲的很多内容,但是并不代表学生可以接受全部。反而实地学习学生可以掌握的更快,因为亲身经历可以记住的更牢。所以实地教育更好。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 1. In fact, no data indicate that studying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no data pointing to studying in the classroom is definitely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, studying in the classroom hasn’t got the evidence of some data. 【作业三】 Someone considers that studying in the classroom has more advantages than going on the field trips. Because teachers would impart more knowledge, it could be more effective. In fact, students determined the efficiency. Inculcating more knowledge doesn’t mean that students grasp all knowledge what has been taught. On the contrary, students are able to grasp more knowledge when they have personal experiences. So going on the field trips are better than the studying in the classroom.