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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为学生可能会因为对实物或者活动过于兴奋而忘记学习知识的目的。但是正是因为这种兴趣能帮助他们更好的记忆这次课的过程,课后也有可能会自己想知道这个方面的知识而自主学习。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】1. In fact, no data indicates teaching in classroom is absolutely safe.
2.Actually, there is no data pointing to having courses in classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, having courses in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the evidence of data.
【作业三】Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 09:45:13 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such[a] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves【感觉有点奇怪】 after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits【你这个词是动词还是名次?】 more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
写得很好,有的地方有点奇怪,但我也不知道怎么表达更好…好心塞

2016-05-11 09:55
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Some people believe that classroom education does【is】 better than field trips. Since they may too【to】 excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is 【缺少介词 of 】such interest 【缺少介词 in】attracting them that can help them to remember the process【of】 leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed【 用词不当 ,应该是打错了 Field】 trips【缺少介词 to】 teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits. 注意一下介词的使用,会让你的表达更精准
2016-05-11 12:59
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however 这句改的好多了,写太长了,后悔了。最后一句的是Field trips teaching 名词修饰名词,不用加介词吧。
2016-05-11 13:05
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评论 1 楼: which benefits 的先行词是teaching 这里是动词 however那句写太长了,后悔了-_-
2016-05-11 13:07
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may [be] too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such [an] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more[不要more因为incomparable就是无可匹敌] incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 19:32
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评论 5 楼: 3Q ^-^
2016-05-11 19:36
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评论 3楼 刚想起来好像有一点我给你说错了,你自己发现可就好,脑抽了不好意思小伙伴……😜
2016-05-12 00:05
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莫名地感觉这一篇好难好难。。。 【作业一】 有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习容易发生一些安全事故,而在教室学习相对比较安全。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。安全与否取决于老师的组织管理,如果老师管理不当,在教室学习也不能保证绝对安全。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,例如激发学生的学习热情,所以对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… In fact,no statistics indicates that children educated in classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… Actually,there is no statistics pointing to children educated in classroom is absolutely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. As a matter of fact,the fact that children educated in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the statistics. 【作业三】 A small number of people support the idea that childran educated in classroom has more positive effects on learning than children educated in field trip.They hold the oppinion that there is more safty accidents to happen during field trip ,while learning in an enclosed classroom is comparatively safer.In fact,no statistics indicates that childern educated in classroom is absolutely safe.The safety of pupil is depended on the ability of teachers' supervise organization.If teacher can not manage appropriately,students would also in a dangerous condition.While field trip have imcomparable virtues than study in classroom,it can stimulate students' learning passion which is more important in a long run.
1] 有人认为教室的学习比实地学习对孩子教育更好,因为实地学习存在一定的危险,而且在室外实地的学习更容易让孩子们把注意力转移到其他地方上。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的,其实这取决去老师的管理与安排,而注意力的问题主要是由老师的讲解方式确定的。若老师管理疏忽,且老师的教授方式枯燥无味,那么就算在教室,孩子们也并不安全,注意力一样会分散。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 2] In fact, no data indicates it is perfectly safe for students to study in classroom. Actually, there is no evidence pointing to it that students are protected perfectly by studying in classroom. As a matter of fact, we hasn't got the evidence of students' perfect safety in classroom. 3] There is another point that some people believe that staying in the classroom at school is better for students than going on field trips. After all, there exist some danger outside, and students distracted more easily on field trips. As a matter of fact, we hasn't got the evidence of students' perfect safety in classroom, which mostly depends on teachers' arrangements and managements, and the problem of attention is guided by the way of imparting. If a teacher has some bugs on his managements and pass on his knowledge without any interest, students can not be guaranteed their safety and they also consider other things rather than concentrate on the context, even though they are in classroom. Conversely, field study shows incomparable advantages better for students' education.
【作业一】 有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习容易发生一些安全事故,而在教室学习相对比较安全。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。安全与否取决于老师的组织管理,如果老师管理不当,在教室学习也不能保证绝对安全。我认为实地学习有两个原因,有助于学生更好的理解所学知识,更能激发学生的学习兴趣。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 1. In fact, no data indicates it is absolutely secure to study in classroom. 2. Actually, there is no data pointing to studying in classroom that it is absolutely secure. 3. As a matter of fact, absolutely security hasn’t got the evidence of studying in classroom. 【作业三】 Some people think it is good for children to study in classroom rather than on field trips. Compared to staying on field trips, it is relatively secure in classroom. In fact, no one can ensure children’s absolutely security in classroom, which depends on the teacher’s administration. Without correct administration, something dangerous may occur accidently. In my opinion, there are two reasons that students get good understanding about knowledge and the interest about learning can be aroused explain why studying outdoors has advantage over classroom. As a whole, learning on the field trips is better than that in classroom to children’s education.

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