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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为学生可能会因为对实物或者活动过于兴奋而忘记学习知识的目的。但是正是因为这种兴趣能帮助他们更好的记忆这次课的过程,课后也有可能会自己想知道这个方面的知识而自主学习。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】1. In fact, no data indicates teaching in classroom is absolutely safe.
2.Actually, there is no data pointing to having courses in classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, having courses in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the evidence of data.
【作业三】Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 09:45:13 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such[a] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves【感觉有点奇怪】 after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits【你这个词是动词还是名次?】 more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
写得很好,有的地方有点奇怪,但我也不知道怎么表达更好…好心塞

2016-05-11 09:55
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Some people believe that classroom education does【is】 better than field trips. Since they may too【to】 excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is 【缺少介词 of 】such interest 【缺少介词 in】attracting them that can help them to remember the process【of】 leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed【 用词不当 ,应该是打错了 Field】 trips【缺少介词 to】 teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits. 注意一下介词的使用,会让你的表达更精准
2016-05-11 12:59
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however 这句改的好多了,写太长了,后悔了。最后一句的是Field trips teaching 名词修饰名词,不用加介词吧。
2016-05-11 13:05
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评论 1 楼: which benefits 的先行词是teaching 这里是动词 however那句写太长了,后悔了-_-
2016-05-11 13:07
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may [be] too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such [an] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more[不要more因为incomparable就是无可匹敌] incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 19:32
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评论 5 楼: 3Q ^-^
2016-05-11 19:36
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评论 3楼 刚想起来好像有一点我给你说错了,你自己发现可就好,脑抽了不好意思小伙伴……😜
2016-05-12 00:05
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【作业一】 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育好。因为实地学生容易发生一些事故且无法保证每一个学生都能够跟随老师的带领而不是跑去玩,而在教室学习相对比较完全且能保证每个同学都在教室上课。事实上,在教室上课也并不是绝非的安全,并且在教室上课,即使能保证每个学生都坐在教室里却不能保证每个学生都认真听讲。而实地教学中,能激发学生的兴趣,加深学生对知识的理解,这是教室学习所没有的优点,所以我觉得实地教学对孩子更好。 【作业二】 In fact, no data indicates studying in the classroom is absolute security. Actually, there is no data pointing that learning in the claa is definite safety. As a matter of fact, data hasn't got the evidence that attending class is definite safety. 【作业三】 Some hold the opinion that studying in the class does better than goning field trips since that field trips may occur some accidents and there is no guarantee that every student can follow the teacher rather than playing nearby. So they believe that studying in the class is the best way for students because it's safe and teachers can observe which students doesn't attend class distinctly. Actually, there is no data pointing that learning in the claa is definite safety.and even if students sit in the classroom, they may hard concentrate on what teachers have taught. However, going field trips have some advantages such as arousing students' curiosity and deepening understanding, which studying in the classroom doesn't have. As far as I am concerned, field trips do better in students.

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