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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为学生可能会因为对实物或者活动过于兴奋而忘记学习知识的目的。但是正是因为这种兴趣能帮助他们更好的记忆这次课的过程,课后也有可能会自己想知道这个方面的知识而自主学习。实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】1. In fact, no data indicates teaching in classroom is absolutely safe.
2.Actually, there is no data pointing to having courses in classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, having courses in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the evidence of data.
【作业三】Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 09:45:13 来自 托福作文咩
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such[a] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves【感觉有点奇怪】 after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits【你这个词是动词还是名次?】 more to kids, has more incomparable merits.
写得很好,有的地方有点奇怪,但我也不知道怎么表达更好…好心塞

2016-05-11 09:55
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Some people believe that classroom education does【is】 better than field trips. Since they may too【to】 excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is 【缺少介词 of 】such interest 【缺少介词 in】attracting them that can help them to remember the process【of】 leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed【 用词不当 ,应该是打错了 Field】 trips【缺少介词 to】 teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more incomparable merits. 注意一下介词的使用,会让你的表达更精准
2016-05-11 12:59
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however 这句改的好多了,写太长了,后悔了。最后一句的是Field trips teaching 名词修饰名词,不用加介词吧。
2016-05-11 13:05
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评论 1 楼: which benefits 的先行词是teaching 这里是动词 however那句写太长了,后悔了-_-
2016-05-11 13:07
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Some people believe that classroom education does better than field trips. Since they may [be] too excited about the objects observed or activities attended, students are most likely to forget the core aim of gaining knowledge. However, it is such [an] interest attracting them that can help them to remember the process leading them to review the information themselves after class. Filed trips teaching, which benefits more to kids, has more[不要more因为incomparable就是无可匹敌] incomparable merits.
2016-05-11 19:32
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评论 5 楼: 3Q ^-^
2016-05-11 19:36
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评论 3楼 刚想起来好像有一点我给你说错了,你自己发现可就好,脑抽了不好意思小伙伴……😜
2016-05-12 00:05
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【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习的时候学生经常会不认真跑出去玩,没有心思学习。但事实上,,就算是在教室里学习,学生也会分心走神,这个问题和上课的地点无关。学生是否能专心学习,取决于老师传授的知识是否足够有吸引力,学生对所学内容是否有探索的热情。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 1. In fact, no information indicates it is extremely safe when students study in classroom. 2. Actually, there is no information pointing to the fact that it is extremely safe when students study in classroom. 3. As a matter of fact, it is absolutely safe when students study in classroom hasn’t got the evidence of statistics 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习的时候学生经常会不认真跑出去玩,没有心思学习。但事实上,,就算是在教室里学习,学生也会分心走神,这个问题和上课的地点无关。学生是否能专心学习,取决于老师传授的知识是否足够有吸引力,学生对所学内容是否有探索的热情。 Somebody claims that study in classroom is better for children education than field studying. Due to students always lose their attention when they study in field, they are appealed to field scenery and are not willing to study any more. However, even though students are studying in classroom all day, they will be distracted by something else either. It is obvious that distraction has nothing to do with class venue. Whether students could be absorbed in studying depends on teacher’s ability to teach knowledge and students’ delight on the knowledge.
【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 【答题】 有些人认为教室内学习更好,学生可以在安静的环境下,更加集中精力的听老师讲课。事实上,安静的学习环境未必吸引学生听课,如果老师讲课无法吸引学生的注意力,会导致学生对该课程的兴趣大大下降。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,所以对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 【答题】 1. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no evidence pointing to that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, staying in the classroom hasn't got the evidence of safe. 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 some people pointed out that staying in the classrooms is better choice because of the quiet environment to increase attention. In fact, However, no evidence indicates that staying in the classrooms is absolutely attractable. if the teacher can not fetch students to listen, will probably decrease the interests of students for the class. Whatever, field trips are more advantageous for children's education rather than staying in the classroom.
「作业一」 有人认为教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习很可能分散学生的注意力,有的学生本身的自制力就比较差,如果让他们到户外活动,不仅没有令他们对所学知识没有了解,还浪费了本应该在课堂学习的时间。事实上,并没有证据表明,在课堂上的教授会比实地学习更有效。另外,学生是否能狗专注于所学知识,是在于老师的引导,也在于学生自己的态度。就算在课堂上,如果老师教课的水平不高,学生自制力较差,那还不如在实地感受来的更佳直观。 「作业二」 Some people consider that it is more efficiency of studying in classroon than of field lessons, because field lessons are likely to distract students' concentration on what they should observe. If some students have weak self control, taking part in field lessons, they would barely not only gain the relevant knowldege, but also spend time on what is should spend on schools. Virtually, there is no evidence showing that daily learning in school is more effective than that outside. In addition, whether studnets could focus on knowledge or subjects relys on teaching method and students' attitude. Even if studying in class, students cannot definitely acquire more knowledge when teathers are lower teaching skills and students are unself-control. At least, under same condition, outside learning gives students more direct perception. 「作业三」 1. In fact, no data indicates that learning in classroom is definitely safty. 2. Actually, there is no data pointing to a phenomenon that studying in school is definitely safty. 3. As a matter of fact, learning inside is definitly safty hasn't got the evidence of data.