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#托福作文咩第 10 期 Day 7# 【作业一】 但有些人可能认为教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为实地学习可能发生各种意外,像安全事故或学生走丢等。事实上并没有任何数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。是否安全决定于教师的管理是否得当和提前对安全隐患的排查。如果这两点都做不到的话,那么即使在室内学习也有可能发生各种事故。而与教室学习相比,实地学习能给学生带来的益处不胜枚举,所以我认为实地学习对孩子的教育更好。
【作业二】 1. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe.
2. Actually, there is no evidence pointing to that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe.
3. As a matter of fact, we haven't got the evidence of which staying in the classroom is absolutely safe.
【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。
However, some are of the opinion that staying in the classroom at school is more preferable to field trips, asserting that emergencies like safety accidents and straying may occur in field trips. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. The comparative safety of children completely depends on supervision and the regular inspection of potential risks and security threats. If these two cannot be managed, emergencies can happen even indoors. Thus, with the benefits mentioned above taken into account, field trips are more advantageous and constructive for children's education rather than staying in the classroom.
2016-05-11 09:33:00 来自 托福作文咩
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However, some are of the opinion that staying in the classroom at school is more preferable【这个词好,我收了】 to field trips, asserting that emergencies like safety accidents and straying may occur in field trips. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. The comparative safety of children completely depends on supervision and the regular inspection of potential risks and security threats. If these two cannot be managed, emergencies can happen even indoors. Thus, with the benefits mentioned above taken into account, field trips are more advantageous and constructive for children's education rather than staying in the classroom. 整体写的很好啊,个人觉得作为让步段,字数有一丢丢多。把某个长句改成简单的短句,整段读起来可能好点?
2016-05-11 09:54
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However, some are of the opinion that staying in the classroom at school is more preferable to field trips, asserting that emergencies like safety accidents and straying may occur in field trips. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. The comparative safety of children completely depends on supervision and the regular inspection of potential risks and security threats. If these two cannot be managed, emergencies can happen even indoors. Thus, with the benefits mentioned above taken into account[taking the benefits mentioned above into account这样比较好吧,不然这样成分怎么化?], field trips are more advantageous and constructive for children's education rather than staying in the classroom.没啥问题啦,挺好的
2016-05-11 19:23
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2016-05-11 19:25
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【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 1.对方的看法:易于分散精力 2.对方的漏洞:没有任何数据表明在课堂里学生就会集中注意力学习。 3.实地教学所带来的好处是传统教学无法替代的 但有些人可能认为教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。因为在实地学习中,学生可能会被各种新奇的事物所吸引,或是交头接耳,这些都是老师所无法控制的,因此实地学习可能会分散学生的注意力。事实上没有任何数据表明在课堂里学生就会集中注意力学习。学生是否能集中精神学习取决于教师的授课方式以及授课内容等等。如果这几点都做不到的话,那么即使在室内学习学生也会分散注意力,从而无法获得好的学习效果。而与教室学习相比,实地学习能给学生带来的益处不胜枚举,所以我认为实地学习对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. data 1. In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no evidence pointing to that staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, we haven't got the evidence of which staying in the classroom is absolutely safe. 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 However, some hold the opinion that staying in the classroom would not have students distracted by novelty or chat with others, which cannot be managed by teachers in field study, therefore classroom is better than field.In fact, no evidence indicates that staying in the classroom can help students concentrate. It all depends on teacher's methods and teaching content.
【作业一】 请结合上述观点、理由和让步段,仿写一个新的让步段。写的时候可以包含以下步骤: 1. 指出对方的看法。 2. 指出对方的漏洞。 3. 强调己方观点的正确性。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习的时候学生经常会不认真跑出去玩,没有心思学习。但事实上,,就算是在教室里学习,学生也会分心走神,这个问题和上课的地点无关。学生是否能专心学习,取决于老师传授的知识是否足够有吸引力,学生对所学内容是否有探索的热情。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. 1. In fact, no information indicates it is extremely safe when students study in classroom. 2. Actually, there is no information pointing to the fact that it is extremely safe when students study in classroom. 3. As a matter of fact, it is absolutely safe when students study in classroom hasn’t got the evidence of statistics 【作业三】 请将你在作业一中写的让步段翻译成英文。 有人认为在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习的时候学生经常会不认真跑出去玩,没有心思学习。但事实上,,就算是在教室里学习,学生也会分心走神,这个问题和上课的地点无关。学生是否能专心学习,取决于老师传授的知识是否足够有吸引力,学生对所学内容是否有探索的热情。 Somebody claims that study in classroom is better for children education than field studying. Due to students always lose their attention when they study in field, they are appealed to field scenery and are not willing to study any more. However, even though students are studying in classroom all day, they will be distracted by something else either. It is obvious that distraction has nothing to do with class venue. Whether students could be absorbed in studying depends on teacher’s ability to teach knowledge and students’ delight on the knowledge.
莫名地感觉这一篇好难好难。。。 【作业一】 有人认为与在教室学习比实地学习对孩子的教育更好。这是因为实地学习容易发生一些安全事故,而在教室学习相对比较安全。事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。安全与否取决于老师的组织管理,如果老师管理不当,在教室学习也不能保证绝对安全。而实地学习具有教室学习无法比拟的优点,例如激发学生的学习热情,所以对孩子的教育更好。 【作业二】 请分别用下列句型翻译这句话:事实上,并没有数据表明在教室学习就是绝对安全的。 1. In fact, no A indicates B… In fact,no statistics indicates that children educated in classroom is absolutely safe. 2. Actually, there is no A pointing to B that… Actually,there is no statistics pointing to children educated in classroom is absolutely safe. 3. As a matter of fact, B hasn’t got the evidence of A. As a matter of fact,the fact that children educated in classroom is absolutely safe hasn't got the statistics. 【作业三】 A small number of people support the idea that childran educated in classroom has more positive effects on learning than children educated in field trip.They hold the oppinion that there is more safty accidents to happen during field trip ,while learning in an enclosed classroom is comparatively safer.In fact,no statistics indicates that childern educated in classroom is absolutely safe.The safety of pupil is depended on the ability of teachers' supervise organization.If teacher can not manage appropriately,students would also in a dangerous condition.While field trip have imcomparable virtues than study in classroom,it can stimulate students' learning passion which is more important in a long run.

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