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TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16
2016-05-16

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根据课上所学句型翻译下列句子。
1. 不要老是将百度和谷歌相提并论,两者的价值观都不一样。
2. 青少年很容易痴迷网络游戏,家长和老师应该做好预防。
3. 那一刻我特别难过,但还是强忍住没哭出来。
4. 他很清楚,如果现在不采取有效措施,后果将是毁灭性的。
5. 对大多数人来说,刚开始工作的第一年,入不敷出是必然的。

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叶不羞
05-16
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 我是不是第一个交作业的- -【但总觉得会有好多错?】
1.Don't always put Baidu on a par with Google because of their different senses of value.
2.Teenagers are easily crazy on online games so that the teachers and parents should take preventive measures.
3.I was very sad at that moment but still endured...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
你们聊得欢啊~ 整体很好,有几个小问题: 1. 价值观用 values 就可以表示,不用说这么长,啰嗦。 5. most 后面的 of 需要省掉。另外。「必然的」我们一般用 inevitable 或者certain 表示。necessary 多用来表示「必要的」,不过名词 necessity 可用来表示「必然性」。上课来写作业也是没问题的,趁热乎!
2016-05-19 15:00:35
2016-05-16 20:32:05 来自 陪练狮
irisyao
05-16
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# Do not mention google and baidu in the same way for the values between them are different.
Juveniles are easily addicted to internet,both teachers and parents should have precaution.
I feel extremely sad at that moment but i still held back my tears.
He saw through it clearly that the catastropic re...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
2. 两个举止之间要用连接词或者分号隔开 4. see through 就已经是「看透」的意思啦,所以不用再加上 clearly,会显得画蛇添足。另外这句话用了虚拟语气,这很好,不过其实可以不用,可以这么写: He sees it through that the catastrophic result would appear if he takes no measures right now. 5. at an occupation 的表达不好,可以改为 at work
2016-05-19 15:06:24
2016-05-16 21:19:33 来自 陪练狮
Jasonnjut
05-16
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1. 不要老是将百度和谷歌相提并论,两者的价值观都不一样。
Baidu and Google can't be placed in the same category for the difference between their values.
2. 青少年很容易痴迷网络游戏,家长和老师应该做好预防。
Teenagers are easily obsessed with online games where parents and teachers should make preventi...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
太棒啦,Jason!有两个 tiny 问题哈: 3. heartbroken 可以表示已经悲伤到几点,所以前面的 extremely 需要删掉 5. most 后面的 of 去掉。
2016-05-19 15:08:23
2016-05-16 21:22:04 来自 陪练狮
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Don't put Baidu on a par with Google,because it's totally different between their values.
2.Teenagers is easy to be mad about online games,so both parents and teachers should a good prevention.
3.I was so sad at that moment but still endured not to cry out.
4.He knows it distinctly that if do not...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
2. is 改为 are should 和 a good prevention 之前缺乏动词 4. if 从句缺主语 5. 工作第一年的意思没有翻译出来呢~ 短时记忆不错,不过最好还有记下笔记奥,辅助记忆。所谓好记性不如烂笔头~
2016-05-19 15:11:15
2016-05-16 21:25:35 来自 陪练狮
RayLambert
05-16
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# Don't put Baidu on a par with Google,they don't have the same sense of worth.
It's easy for teen to be obessed with network games,parents and teachers should prevent.
At that moment,I was sorrowful,but I hold sucked my tears back.
He knows well that if he does not take measures the result would be d...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. 两句话你中间要用分号隔开,或者加上连接词如 because。价值观用 values 表达就行 2. teen 用复数,同样中间用分号 3. hold 和 suck 同为动词,保留一个就可以。所谓「一山不容二虎」~ 5. that they have work 表达繁琐,可以改为 at work。
2016-05-19 15:14:10
2016-05-16 21:25:50 来自 陪练狮
Ivy-0318
05-16
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# Baidu can't Google for their different values.
Juvenile is spellbound by online games, so parents and teachers should take precautions in advance.
I feel so blue at that moment, but I manage to keep myself from crying.
He has a clue that the consequence is devastating if effective measures are not...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. can‘t 在这里想表达什么含义呢?没看懂哟 3. 用过去时会更好,blue 用的好!👍
2016-05-19 15:15:47
2016-05-16 22:38:52 来自 陪练狮
MissCorn
05-17
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Please do not compare favorably with Baidu and Google, beacuse they have different sense of worth.
2.Teenagers are addicted to cyber games easily,and parents and teachers should take precautions against it.
3.In that moment,I was very sad,but Isucked it up.
4.He is very clear that if he does not t...... 查看全部
刘晓丽 回答:
1. compare A with B。价值观用 values 就可以 3. In 改为 At。 it 在前文没有指代,需要改为 my tears 做的不错,对自己要有信心!
2016-05-19 15:18:48
2016-05-17 00:33:27 来自 陪练狮
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1. Don't bracket Baidu with Google, they have different value.
2. The young easily addict themselves in online game, parents and teachers should take precaution.
3. At that moment I was so depressed, but I still fought back all the tears.
4. He was perfectly clear if don't take effective measure now...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. 逗号改为分号 2. in 改为 to。同样逗号改句号 4. if 句缺主语 5. that running  改为 to run
2016-05-19 15:20:59
2016-05-17 09:53:30 来自 陪练狮
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 从第6个词组开始上课的= =
1.Do not compare baidu with google ,for they have totally different values.
2.Adolescents have a heavy crush on computer games, witch means parents and teachers have to well prevent this .
3. At that moment I was sad but did not cry.
4.He knew that we would wake a sleeping d...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
5. free of charge 是免费的意思,用在这里不合适啊!前面四个句子翻译的很好!课件早就传到网上啦,去看看
2016-05-19 15:22:45
2016-05-17 14:43:36 来自 陪练狮
MiZuKun
05-17
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1. 不要老是将百度和谷歌相提并论,两者的价值观都不一样。
1.Do not always make Baidu compare favorably with Google, both of the values are not the same.(总感觉我哪里写错了O__O )
2. 青少年很容易痴迷网络游戏,家长和老师应该做好预防。
Teenagers are easily addicted to online games, parents and teachers sh...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. compare A with B 就行,不用这么繁琐, both 句改为 for their values are distinct. 2. 逗号改为分号 3. endure 用过去时 4. 去掉 is,understand用第三人称单数 5. first 和 beginning 意思重复,徐删掉一个。 总结,有很多小错,需要自己多检查啊,只要细心,是可以避免的!另外表达要准确简洁,不要啰嗦哈
2016-05-19 15:26:21
2016-05-17 16:25:21 来自 陪练狮
刘纸巾
05-17
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Do not let Baidu hold a candle to Google;they even have different values.
2.Teenagers are addicted to computer games easily; parents and teachers should take some preventive measures.
3.I am sick at heart that moment, but I still suck it up.
4.He has a clue that it will be destructive if do no tak...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. even 可以省略 4. if 句缺主语 5. as the 改为 for
2016-05-19 15:28:53
2016-05-17 17:53:13 来自 陪练狮
Anao
05-17
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Baidu cannot always hold a candle to Google for the different values.
2.Since teenagers are easily addicted to online games, parents and teachers should take precautions.
3.I suck my tears up for that bloody sad moment.
4.He definitely has a clue that the outcome will be devastating if not taking ...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. always 用在这里的意思就变成「百度不能一直和谷歌相提并论」,暗指有时候两者是可以相提并论的,这与原句含义就不一致,需要注意。 3. 这句翻译的很酷,情感表达很到位 5. most 后面的 of 删掉
2016-05-19 15:31:35
2016-05-17 18:04:31 来自 陪练狮
ShawWardrop
05-17
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Do not always put Baidu on a par with Google for they are even differ from senses of value.
2.Teenagers can be easily addicted to online video games,both teacher and parents should take some prevention.
3.I'm very hurt at that moment,however,I restrain myself from weeping.
4.He is aware of that th...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
1. are 和 differ 在竞争谓语的地位,需要干掉一个,或者 differ 改为 different,退位让贤~ 2.  逗号改为分号 3. restrain 用过去时 4. of 后面奸商宾语 the fact 5. inescapable 
2016-05-19 15:34:07
2016-05-17 18:41:40 来自 陪练狮
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1. 不要老是将百度和谷歌相提并论,两者的价值观都不一样。
【译】Don’t always mention Baidu in the same breath with Google; They have different values.
2. 青少年很容易痴迷网络游戏,家长和老师应该做好预防。
【译】Teenagers are prone to having a crush on internet games, so parents and teachers should ta...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
灰常好!不过第五句可以精简一下~ it is inevitable that most  people can't make ends meet in the first year of work.
2016-05-19 15:36:14
2016-05-17 21:40:58 来自 陪练狮
青漪Lily
05-18
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# Don't put Baidu on a par with Google frequently because of the difference between their values.
Since juveniles are easy to indulge in internet game, parents and teachers should take precautions.
At that moment I was extremely sad, but I sucked my tears up.
He understands that if effective measures ...... 查看全部
Stella 回答:
perfect!
2016-05-19 15:36:57
2016-05-18 01:06:52 来自 陪练狮
rui88
05-19
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# 1.Don't put Baidu and Google into the same level, the two have different value.
2.Teenagers are likely to attracted by online games, so teachers and parents should prevent that happening.
3. The moment i feel frustrated, i struggle to holdback my tears.
4. It's obvious for him, if there is no effect...... 查看全部
刘晓丽 回答:
1. value 用复数 2. be attracted  4.第一个逗号改为 that
2016-05-19 15:38:24
2016-05-19 15:07:11 来自 陪练狮
olivia^p
05-19
#TOEFL&IELTS遣词造句2016-5-16# Don't always put Baidu on a par with Google, because they have different values.
Teenagers are easily obsessed with computer games, so pareants and teachers should do a prevention.
At that moment, I was pretty sad but I still restrain myself from crying.
He has a cule that, if he dosen't take effict...... 查看全部
2016-05-19 16:21:20 来自 陪练狮

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