#召唤陪练狮#
Web_U10565596 向 朗播_王宜涵老师 老师提问:
#召唤陪练狮#
麻烦老师帮我改下开头,
题目:Is money a Good Motivator ?
Some companies give their employees bonuses or cash awards for excellence work, in addition to salary. Do you think this is a good idea? Are cash incentives a good way to m......
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语法上没什么大的问题,但在内容上,还是听一下写作的方法课,学习一下如何组织开头段的内容
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